children should not be forced by law to be educated by either public schools or home schooling if their parents do not wish them to do so
Sometimes success is not achieved if we are not forced against our wish.
some argue that children should not be forced by law to be educated by either public schools or home schooling if their parents do not wish them to do so while others states that children should be forced by law to be educated even if their parents do not wish them so. After weighing the evidence, it is certain that children should be forced by law to be educated even if their parents do not which them so.
people who argue that children should not be forced by law to be educated by either public schools or home schooling if their parents do not wish them to do so. might point to the fact that parents knows the intelligence level of their children and thus some children might not need to go to school and also that the child might be offering an important role to the parent as such that when they are in school they might not be useful. Take for instance the story of monia, the aged woman in Italy who has only one child that help her to howk and find means of living, when this child was forced to school, In space of a week, we heard that this woman died. this claim might be true but it is also worthy to know that they are selling the future of this children.
For those that claim that children should be forced to school even if their parents did not wish so would point to the saying that education is legacy that if the child is well educated, it will be useful for both the parent and the child. And that nothing good comes easy. For example, people that made it in life made it through edurance and resilience.
In conclusion, it is clear that children should be forced to school even if their parents do not wish because success is not achieved by our wish but our resilience.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, thus, well, while, as for, for example, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 19.5258426966 128% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 12.4196629213 113% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 14.8657303371 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 22.0 11.3162921348 194% => OK
Pronoun: 48.0 33.0505617978 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 58.6224719101 61% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 12.9106741573 54% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1449.0 2235.4752809 65% => OK
No of words: 336.0 442.535393258 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.3125 5.05705443957 85% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28139028586 4.55969084622 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.08125534122 2.79657885939 74% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 215.323595506 61% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.389880952381 0.4932671777 79% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 430.2 704.065955056 61% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.59117977528 82% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 20.2370786517 54% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 23.0359550562 130% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 78.8805981236 60.3974514979 131% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.727272727 118.986275619 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.5454545455 23.4991977007 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.81818181818 5.21951772744 150% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 7.80617977528 102% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 10.2758426966 29% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 5.13820224719 136% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.733040184057 0.243740707755 301% => The coherence between essay topic and essay body is overfitting.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.316509753543 0.0831039109588 381% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.317758079259 0.0758088955206 419% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.41504260946 0.150359130593 276% => Maybe some contents are duplicated.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.258552471494 0.0667264976115 387% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 14.1392134831 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.41 48.8420337079 136% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 12.1743820225 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.31 12.1639044944 68% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.68 8.38706741573 80% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 100.480337079 33% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.8971910112 113% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 11.2143820225 125% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.7820224719 119% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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