Claim: An action is morally correct if the amount of good that results from the action is greater than the amount of bad that results from the action.
Reason: When assessing the morality of an action, the results of the action are more important than the intent of the person or people performing the action.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim AND the reason on which that claim is based.
There have been various important desicions that are taken daily at higher levels of the society or at the rudimentary level. All these desicions directly or indirectly affect our daily lives in a manner. But when it comes to evaluating a desicion's or judgements morality or it's effectiveness we need to dive deeper into the insticts and the posssible ramifications a desicion may have on the lives of the commoners. Is it beneficial to all, or detrimental to all or is it aimed at helping only some divisions of the society, all these crriteria need to be justified and proved true.
In everyday life we come across people who mean good or bad both to us, but despite of this mixture life goes on. The ability of a well-reformed desicion is to touch and try to improve the lives of majority of individuals. Therefore the claim made is logically sound and seems just. For example, consider the abrogation of Triple Talaq which occured in 2019. The law gives women in the Muslim community to come out and fight against the severe injustice that they have been suffering for many years. The results of this new law is seen, women are now considered on par with men and also they are becoming more independent and self-reliant. In this particular scenario, the good outweighs the bad and at the end of the day, the good and beneficial things are remebered by the commoners,and it is the same ideology that they may advocate.
Secondly, when the assessment of the validity and justification of a certain event or ction is to be done, the intent of the action, no doubt plays a cucial part in formulating and developing the plan of action. But with the current size of population and diversity that is present, a lot more focus should be on the implementation aspect. A lot of good thoughts and ideas are being presented everyday but there implementation is a major point. For example, the Demonotization that occured in 2016, was a well thought plan and it's intent was crystal clear to fifgt against black money. Despite it's noble intent and ideology the plan failed and caused havoc in the lives of citizens. At the end of the day in a battlefield if there are more number of kills on your side than on the opponent's side then it is a case of victory.
Though much weight has been put on the implementation aspect, there are some exceptions in which though the intent may not be beneficial , but if luck has it's way then it improves an lot problems faced by individuals in daily life.
Thus by stating and explaining the above points, we can come to the conclusion that even though the intent of an action may be good or bad, how the action or ideology is implemented is crucial. When the dust settles at the end of the day, the results matter more than the intent. Results and possible outcomes of the action are the one's that are going to prove helpful in people's lives in the upcoming future. The common belief and way of thinking of every individual is that if the good outcomes are more than the bad one's then the action is a just one being taken.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, thus, well, for example, no doubt
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 36.0 19.5258426966 184% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 12.4196629213 64% => OK
Conjunction : 35.0 14.8657303371 235% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.3162921348 124% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 33.0505617978 97% => OK
Preposition: 77.0 58.6224719101 131% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 12.9106741573 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2513.0 2235.4752809 112% => OK
No of words: 548.0 442.535393258 124% => OK
Chars per words: 4.58576642336 5.05705443957 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.83832613839 4.55969084622 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67211562693 2.79657885939 96% => OK
Unique words: 258.0 215.323595506 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.470802919708 0.4932671777 95% => OK
syllable_count: 812.7 704.065955056 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 6.24550561798 16% => OK
Article: 11.0 4.99550561798 220% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 1.77640449438 338% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.2370786517 109% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 23.0359550562 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.8350366836 60.3974514979 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.227272727 118.986275619 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.9090909091 23.4991977007 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.18181818182 5.21951772744 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 7.80617977528 128% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 5.13820224719 136% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.83258426966 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.213882226032 0.243740707755 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0561439882031 0.0831039109588 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0709697116905 0.0758088955206 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112594524551 0.150359130593 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.118789245328 0.0667264976115 178% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 14.1392134831 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 48.8420337079 114% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 12.1743820225 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.64 12.1639044944 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.26 8.38706741573 98% => OK
difficult_words: 119.0 100.480337079 118% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.8971910112 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 11.2143820225 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.