Claim: Any piece of information referred to as a fact should be mistrusted, since it may well be proven false in the future.Reason: Much of the information that people assume is factual actually turns out to be inaccurate.

Essay topics:

Claim: Any piece of information referred to as a fact should be mistrusted, since it may well be proven false in the future.

Reason: Much of the information that people assume is factual actually turns out to be inaccurate.

This issue stated that any piece of information reffered as a fact that should be mistrusted becuase of to much information that people assume is factually wrong and inaccurate. Indisputably, it is true that many information that people assume and predict are inaccurate. Nevertheless, There are many scenarios in that assumption of the people are becomes true. So, stated in this way claim is unpersuasive. Generally, I disagree with the claim and stated in this manner and would argue that there are many scenarios in that people assumption becomes true in future.

First of all, I would like to point out the example of second world war, at that time the wars between countries at pinnacle stage. The British generals assumes that if they supports to the germany forces than probably russian millatry attacks on them and in future will be to dangerous. But pressure of the goverment officials, British general take the step to supports the germany force, and after one week russian force send the message and give the warning but british still supports to the germany and after 10 days wars intiated between Britan and Russia Consequently it is obvious that some time assumption becomes true in future.

Second, In 1992 Indian government predict that flood position will be happen in august month. but after several days there is no any environment clues that suggest high rain and flood situation occur and people avoid this information. But when august comes and it's first week, in many region of india where highly rain falls down and all rivers are overflows due to this flood occurs and many people are death in this tragedy. Both the comman sense and personal experience told us that the there are many situation where prediction will becomes true.

Admittedly, The author's view is true that much of the information that people assume is factual actually inaccurate. Specifically, many time student assumes the answers of the question in exams are true but it will be wrong and student will get lower marks. in history the france government assumes that the if war will be occurs against russia than britain support us, but this assumption also wrong and Britain will not supports to the france. However. The above claims is does not constitute any sufficient support to stated that people assumption are mostly inaccurate.

In conclusion, although it is true that many times people assumption are not true and it is mistrusted, but it is also true that sometimes assumption becomes true in future. As long as some measurment are performed and some area are involved the author claims still holds. In fact if author extended this claims and brodaly defines than it is more plausible.

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Average: 5.8 (1 vote)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 105, Rule ID: TO_TOO[2]
Message: Did you mean 'too'?
Suggestion: too
...ct that should be mistrusted becuase of to much information that people assume is ...
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Line 1, column 209, Rule ID: MANY_FEW_UNCOUNTABLE[2]
Message: Use 'much' or 'little' with uncountable nouns.
Suggestion: much; little
...accurate. Indisputably, it is true that many information that people assume and pred...
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Line 1, column 209, Rule ID: MANY_NN_U[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun information seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much information', 'a good deal of information'.
Suggestion: much information; a good deal of information
...accurate. Indisputably, it is true that many information that people assume and predict are inac...
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Line 1, column 557, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
... in that people assumption becomes true in future. First of all, I would like to po...
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Line 4, column 155, Rule ID: AGREEMENT_SENT_START[2]
Message: You should probably use 'assume'.
Suggestion: assume
...at pinnacle stage. The British generals assumes that if they supports to the germany fo...
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Line 4, column 176, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
Message: The pronoun 'they' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'support'
Suggestion: support
...e British generals assumes that if they supports to the germany forces than probably rus...
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Line 4, column 276, Rule ID: TO_TOO[4]
Message: Did you mean 'too'?
Suggestion: too
...y attacks on them and in future will be to dangerous. But pressure of the govermen...
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Line 4, column 496, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...arning but british still supports to the germany and after 10 days wars intiated ...
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Line 4, column 630, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
... that some time assumption becomes true in future. Second, In 1992 Indian government ...
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Line 6, column 96, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: But
...osition will be happen in august month. but after several days there is no any envi...
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Line 6, column 128, Rule ID: NOW[2]
Message: Did you mean 'now' (=at this moment) instead of 'no' (negation)?
Suggestion: now
... month. but after several days there is no any environment clues that suggest high...
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Line 6, column 282, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun region seems to be countable; consider using: 'many regions'.
Suggestion: many regions
...hen august comes and its first week, in many region of india where highly rain falls down a...
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Line 6, column 502, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun situation seems to be countable; consider using: 'many situations'.
Suggestion: many situations
...l experience told us that the there are many situation where prediction will becomes true. ...
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Line 6, column 507, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'situations'?
Suggestion: situations
...erience told us that the there are many situation where prediction will becomes true. ...
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Line 6, column 539, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'become'
Suggestion: become
...re many situation where prediction will becomes true. Admittedly, The authors view ...
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Line 8, column 260, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: In
...wrong and student will get lower marks. in history the france government assumes t...
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Line 8, column 424, Rule ID: DONT_NEEDS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'support'?
Suggestion: support
...umption also wrong and Britain will not supports to the france. However. The above claim...
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Line 8, column 424, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'support'
Suggestion: support
...umption also wrong and Britain will not supports to the france. However. The above claim...
^^^^^^^^
Line 8, column 448, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
...ritain will not supports to the france. However. The above claims is does not constitut...
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Line 10, column 165, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
... that sometimes assumption becomes true in future. As long as some measurment are perform...
^^^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, consequently, first, however, if, nevertheless, second, so, still, in conclusion, in fact, first of all, it is true

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 29.0 19.5258426966 149% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 12.4196629213 81% => OK
Conjunction : 27.0 14.8657303371 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 23.0 11.3162921348 203% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 42.0 33.0505617978 127% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 58.6224719101 82% => OK
Nominalization: 23.0 12.9106741573 178% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2261.0 2235.4752809 101% => OK
No of words: 451.0 442.535393258 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0133037694 5.05705443957 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.60833598836 4.55969084622 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54814362313 2.79657885939 91% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 215.323595506 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.447893569845 0.4932671777 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 699.3 704.065955056 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 1.77640449438 338% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.2370786517 94% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 23.0359550562 100% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.4835934145 60.3974514979 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.0 118.986275619 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.7368421053 23.4991977007 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.15789473684 5.21951772744 137% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 20.0 7.80617977528 256% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 5.13820224719 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.236319488409 0.243740707755 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0890079394914 0.0831039109588 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.103621005034 0.0758088955206 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137908837836 0.150359130593 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0978398335448 0.0667264976115 147% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 14.1392134831 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 48.8420337079 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 12.1743820225 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.1639044944 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.03 8.38706741573 96% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 100.480337079 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.8971910112 76% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 11.2143820225 100% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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