Prompt: In any field of inquiry, the beginner is more likely than the expert to make important contributions. Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
This topic raises a controversial issue like the beginner is more likely than the expert to
make important contributions or expert contribution more important than beginner. Indisputably,
beginner is more likely than the expert to make important contributions. Nevertheless, sometime
veteran contributions are more important than beginner in some critical situations. Generally,
I agree that beginner is more likely than the expert to make important contributions.
First of all, I would like to point out the example of the school. Where teachers are always
teach conventional mathematical formula rather than shortcuts. But students always find some
short-tricks so they are easily solve a math problem. Here we are clearly seen that students
are beginners and they are always find something unique and that is very helpful to solve
questions. Consider example of history where beginner army man give the best idea how to defeat
Europe country to Adolf Hitler during world-war two. So obvious that the beginner contribution
more important than the expert.
Second, In computer organization where beginner programmer always do a best performance in
company and find efficient algorithm to solve complex problem where veteran programmers often
use conventional algorithm. Because during begin time people always in very confident and
encourage so, often we are see that beginner always find something new and they contributions
are more important than veteran. For example consider the example of google CEO Sunder Pichhai
first he started his carrier with internship in google. During training period he had find the
idea that google should have an own computer browser and he had done some coding and developed
the browser, at that time veteran programmers are do not contribute important coding part.
Admittedly, There are many scenarios where experience of expertise people are very helpful.
Because of veteran people always know what type difficulty occur and how to solve out such
difficulties. Also experts people know all aspects how to complete some project and work
effectively. For example, I would like to point out the example of scientist A.P.J Abdulkalam
he is the Indian scientist and his contribution is very important in Indian space Agency. In
1991, Indian scientist will do a very big mistake if Abdulkalam not provide such important
instruction. Where scientist will plan to start burning vehicle exhausting system at 50 km
onward but it is to dangerous so Abdulkalam give instruction to start 3rd exhaust at 40 km
onward. and this launch had successful during 1992
In conclusion, It is true that the beginners are provide important contribution than the
expert. But there are some situation where expertise experience is more important. So the
author assertion is controversial at some factors. If author define this assertion broadly and
extends with some evidence than author's assertion is more plausible.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 67, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Where” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...to point out the example of the school. Where teachers are always teach conventional...
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'taught'.
Suggestion: taught
... the school. Where teachers are always teach conventional mathematical formula rathe...
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Line 9, column 33, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'solved'.
Suggestion: solved
...d some short-tricks so they are easily solve a math problem. Here we are clearly see...
^^^^^
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'found'.
Suggestion: found
...ents are beginners and they are always find something unique and that is very helpf...
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Message: Use 'the' with the superlative.
Suggestion: the
...ion where beginner programmer always do a best performance in company and find e...
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Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'found'.
Suggestion: found
...n google. During training period he had find the idea that google should have an ow...
^^^^
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Message: Use past participle here: 'found'.
Suggestion: found
...n google. During training period he had find the idea that google should have an ow...
^^^^
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'done'.
Suggestion: done
...r, at that time veteran programmers are do not contribute important coding part. ...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...nd how to solve out such difficulties. Also experts people know all aspects how to ...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: J
... point out the example of scientist A.P.J Abdulkalam he is the Indian scientist ...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: And
... to start 3rd exhaust at 40 km onward. and this launch had successful during 1992 ...
^^^
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'provided'.
Suggestion: provided
...sion, It is true that the beginners are provide important contribution than the expert...
^^^^^^^
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Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'situations'?
Suggestion: situations
...on than the expert. But there are some situation where expertise experience is more impo...
^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, nevertheless, second, so, for example, in conclusion, first of all, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 19.5258426966 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 12.4196629213 40% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 14.8657303371 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.3162921348 133% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 33.0505617978 82% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 58.6224719101 77% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 12.9106741573 116% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2535.0 2235.4752809 113% => OK
No of words: 459.0 442.535393258 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.52287581699 5.05705443957 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.62863751936 4.55969084622 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91567741046 2.79657885939 104% => OK
Unique words: 212.0 215.323595506 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.461873638344 0.4932671777 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 784.8 704.065955056 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.2370786517 119% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 23.0359550562 82% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 46.6678571277 60.3974514979 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.625 118.986275619 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.125 23.4991977007 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.16666666667 5.21951772744 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 33.0 4.97078651685 664% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 13.0 7.80617977528 167% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 10.2758426966 156% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 5.13820224719 117% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.185414154132 0.243740707755 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0747608265374 0.0831039109588 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0998940959656 0.0758088955206 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0658297202489 0.150359130593 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0938485100344 0.0667264976115 141% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 14.1392134831 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 48.8420337079 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 12.1743820225 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.74 12.1639044944 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.23 8.38706741573 98% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 100.480337079 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.8971910112 63% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.2143820225 86% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.7820224719 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.