Claim: Colleges and universities should specify all required courses and eliminate elective courses in order to provide clear guidance for students.
Reason: College students—like people in general—prefer to follow directions rather than make their own decisions.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim and the reason on which that claim is based
Nowadays, there is a different view of the issue about whether colleges should give the specific guidance of the courses to students. Depending on personal experiences and beliefs, we may find that some people hold the opinion that universities should not provide such guidance because students in colleges have the ability to handle this decision, while others have an opposite attitude that college students prefer to follow the direction. As far as I am concerned, I disagree with the statement of the topic that universities should eliminate elective courses and list a clear guidance to students. The following discussion will explore my view.
Indeed, there are some students in colleges that love to follow rules which are made by someone else, because it is easier to have a consummate plan than to make it by themselves. Of course, following the guidance is one of the nature in human, especially when we do not have any idea in our mind, we will expect to have a person to tell you how to do. At the same time, many specific requirements are produced by many very expert scholars that might be much more suitable to students than their own decisions.
On the other hand, we cannot eliminate the choice of the courses because somebody has no such idea which courses he or she wants. The purpose of education in colleges is to teach students to create a sound personality that cultivates the thinking and behavior autonomy to students. If we give up the right to choose courses in universities, we actually abandon the most important thing in colleges. It is equivalent to the invisible cancellation of the university's free exploration, the right to free questioning, and innovation.
In fact, the guidance and the right to let students select courses in free both have their own advantages and disadvantages, and none of them is the best. In order words, we can take different approaches depending on the situations. For example, colleges could rule students to choose the certain courses in the first and second years, and then when they all have the almost equal knowledge and ability to make decisions which courses are their wanting. And as students in third and over years, universities would encourage students to attend more different courses which they are not having such knowledge or they are interested. By such a method, schools can provide the best environment to develop the maximum potential for students.
In conclusion, despite the fact that guidance has the specific benefit to students, there are still many factors we should consider discreetly. Therefore, we cannot presumptuously believe the statement.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 132, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...eone else, because it is easier to have a consummate plan than to make it by themselves. Of ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, first, if, may, second, so, still, then, therefore, third, while, for example, in conclusion, in fact, of course, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 19.5258426966 72% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 12.4196629213 113% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 14.8657303371 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.3162921348 124% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 33.0505617978 109% => OK
Preposition: 59.0 58.6224719101 101% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 12.9106741573 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2210.0 2235.4752809 99% => OK
No of words: 436.0 442.535393258 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.06880733945 5.05705443957 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.56953094068 4.55969084622 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80544623457 2.79657885939 100% => OK
Unique words: 221.0 215.323595506 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.506880733945 0.4932671777 103% => OK
syllable_count: 702.9 704.065955056 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 6.24550561798 128% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.77640449438 225% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.38483146067 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.2370786517 89% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 23.0359550562 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.8483543307 60.3974514979 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.777777778 118.986275619 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.2222222222 23.4991977007 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.83333333333 5.21951772744 150% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 7.80617977528 13% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.83258426966 145% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.365672288193 0.243740707755 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104348471897 0.0831039109588 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.071101745988 0.0758088955206 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.186840575034 0.150359130593 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0997859706887 0.0667264976115 150% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 14.1392134831 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 48.8420337079 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 12.1743820225 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.1639044944 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.01 8.38706741573 96% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 100.480337079 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.8971910112 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 11.2143820225 103% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 83.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 6
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