Claim: Governments must ensure that their major cities receive the financial support they need in order to thrive.
Reason: It is primarily in cities that a nation's cultural traditions are preserved and generated.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim and the reason on which that claim is based.
The fast pace of urbanisation in some countries has an adverse impact on the preservation and generation of cultural traditions instead of making a contribution to the prosperity of them. This essay is going to justify my statement and clarify the relationship between the development of the city and cultural traditions.
Admittedly, cities have more funds and other resources which can protect cultural traditions from extinction. For example, big cities like New York and Shanghai have many museums which preserve historical relics, paintings(复数不要忘记) and other precious calligraphic writings. Such facilities are normally not available in remote areas, as they need a lot of funds and people to construct and maintain. Besides, institutions and people in big cities have more professional knowledge about how to effectively protect the cultural traditions, as they are more likely to be well-educated.
However, sometimes the development of cities take a toll on cultural traditions. For instance, people who work and live in big cities are so busy that they have to eat fast food like KFC and Subway on workdays. Such a lifestyle not only poses a threat to people’s health, but also impair people’s willingness to cook traditional cuisine. As a result, traditional food may die out gradually. By contrast, people who live in small towns don’t have too much pressure on their daily lives. Therefore, many people cook food in the traditional ways. For example, some small villages in China still keep the habit to use wood as the heating material instead of gasoline.
Moreover, even if the cultural traditions are well preserved in cities, it can not guarantee the prosperity of big cities, as there’re many aspects related to cities’ development. The top ranking aspect to evaluate a city is its economic state, because people will feel insecure if the city has been trapped into an economic recession. Also, the preservation of cultural traditions may be affected due to the downturn of economy, as people’s basic physical needs can not be satisfied(fulfilled —> satisfied). In addition, educational system are another aspect which id significant to evaluate a city. Without a better educational systems, children are not able to receive good education and this is going to affect the society in the long term.
In sum, I’m in favour of the government taking the responsibility to pour more funds to cities, which they need to thrive, but the money should not be all spent to the protection of cultural traditions, instead, more attention need to be paid to the economy and fundamental infrastructure like educational system to make sure people in cities live a decent life. In this way, cultural preservations will also be benefited in the long run.
Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'besides', 'but', 'however', 'if', 'may', 'moreover', 'so', 'still', 'therefore', 'well', 'for example', 'for instance', 'in addition', 'as a result']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.26103646833 0.240241500013 109% => OK
Verbs: 0.132437619962 0.157235817809 84% => OK
Adjectives: 0.117082533589 0.0880659088768 133% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0518234165067 0.0497285424764 104% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0191938579655 0.0444667217837 43% => OK
Prepositions: 0.103646833013 0.12292977631 84% => OK
Participles: 0.0249520153551 0.0406280797675 61% => OK
Conjunctions: 3.26901908113 2.79330140395 117% => OK
Infinitives: 0.042226487524 0.030933414821 137% => OK
Particles: 0.00191938579655 0.0016655270985 115% => OK
Determiners: 0.084452975048 0.0997080785238 85% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0153550863724 0.0249443105267 62% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0134357005758 0.0148568991511 90% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2808.0 2732.02544248 103% => OK
No of words: 446.0 452.878318584 98% => OK
Chars per words: 6.29596412556 6.0361032391 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.5955099915 4.58838876751 100% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.378923766816 0.366273622748 103% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.304932735426 0.280924506359 109% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.244394618834 0.200843997647 122% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.168161434978 0.132149295362 127% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.26901908113 2.79330140395 117% => OK
Unique words: 234.0 219.290929204 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.52466367713 0.48968727796 107% => OK
Word variations: 60.695223187 55.4138127331 110% => OK
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6194690265 97% => OK
Sentence length: 22.3 23.380412469 95% => OK
Sentence length SD: 66.6545384801 59.4972553346 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 140.4 141.124799967 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3 23.380412469 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.75 0.674092028746 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.94800884956 101% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.21349557522 0% => OK
Readability: 52.7932735426 51.4728631049 103% => OK
Elegance: 1.91509433962 1.64882698954 116% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.409479169454 0.391690518653 105% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.101847333239 0.123202303941 83% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0640452691367 0.077325440228 83% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.524597644221 0.547984918172 96% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.171912508468 0.149214159877 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.153533077107 0.161403998019 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0776510775322 0.0892212321368 87% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.351886321466 0.385218514788 91% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.10464301263 0.0692045440612 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.275184722261 0.275328986314 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0527780077777 0.0653680567796 81% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.4325221239 96% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.30420353982 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88274336283 123% => OK
Positive topic words: 10.0 7.22455752212 138% => OK
Negative topic words: 4.0 3.66592920354 109% => OK
Neutral topic words: 6.0 2.70907079646 221% => OK
Total topic words: 20.0 13.5995575221 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 79.17 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.75 Out of 6
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.