Claim: Governments must ensure that their major cities receive the financial support they need in order to thrive.Reason: It is primarily in cities that a nation's cultural traditions are preserved and generated.

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Claim: Governments must ensure that their major cities receive the financial support they need in order to thrive.

Reason: It is primarily in cities that a nation's cultural traditions are preserved and generated.

Major cities are economic hubs of every nation. Uplifting of them plays major role in a nation's developement. These cities require and consume more resources, which needs financial support. However the reason stated to give them more funds because they are most important in preserving the cultural traditions is vague and indefensible.Hence I agree with the statement but not with the reason.
A major city has many industries and government organization, colleges etc. Hence, many people live there. Clearly they need more financial resources. The infrastructure such as roads and suage which can sustain a large population needs more sophisticated and large scale systems that may not be need be needed elsewhere. Also there are problems which are only pertaining to cities of large scale such . All these require more funds from the government.
The reason given is right, but plays a less significant role in claiming more funds. A country's tradition is spreaded in entire country.Places of historical importance are everywhere in the country. Actually, major cities are places where people come from different parts of country come mix together. Many people living the cities have actually forgotten the old ritual and culture. While people living in rural area still follow traditional rituals. In order to preserve to preserve culture actually more attention to these people should be given.
Financial support specifically alloted to preserve culture given to cities can serve well due the large population of the cities. However, the population in rural areas still outnumber the population in cities in many countries. Many a times rural population and areas play more significant role in preserving culture. Certain traditional jobs and tradition are only found in rural areas. Alloting funds to cities and not to these areas can actually fail to achive it;s actual purpose.
In conclusion, if financial support is specifically given to cities to preserve culture can have good effects but is still inadeqate for that purpose. And in many cases actually rural areas are more eligible place to recieve such funds.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...sources, which needs financial support. However the reason stated to give them more fun...
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...al traditions is vague and indefensible.Hence I agree with the statement but not with...
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...al traditions is vague and indefensible.Hence I agree with the statement but not with...
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...ll follow traditional rituals. In order to preserve to preserve culture actually more attention to thes...
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...ation in cities in many countries. Many a times rural population and areas play more si...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, hence, however, if, may, so, still, well, while, in conclusion, such as, in many cases

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 19.5258426966 82% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 12.4196629213 64% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 14.8657303371 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.3162921348 53% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 33.0505617978 36% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 58.6224719101 65% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 12.9106741573 108% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1796.0 2235.4752809 80% => OK
No of words: 336.0 442.535393258 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.34523809524 5.05705443957 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28139028586 4.55969084622 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79142227553 2.79657885939 100% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 215.323595506 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.5 0.4932671777 101% => OK
syllable_count: 584.1 704.065955056 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 6.24550561798 16% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.2370786517 114% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 23.0359550562 61% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.9988657684 60.3974514979 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.0869565217 118.986275619 66% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.6086956522 23.4991977007 62% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.65217391304 5.21951772744 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 7.80617977528 141% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.2758426966 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.83258426966 186% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.293610640932 0.243740707755 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.089931280863 0.0831039109588 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.063491545968 0.0758088955206 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.178460307925 0.150359130593 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.059506883353 0.0667264976115 89% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 14.1392134831 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 48.81 48.8420337079 100% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 12.1743820225 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.16 12.1639044944 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.33 8.38706741573 99% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 100.480337079 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 11.8971910112 50% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 11.2143820225 68% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.7820224719 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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