Claim: Governments must ensure that their major cities receive the financial support they need in order to thrive.Reason: It is primarily in cities that a nation's cultural traditions are preserved and generated.

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Claim: Governments must ensure that their major cities receive the financial support they need in order to thrive.

Reason: It is primarily in cities that a nation's cultural traditions are preserved and generated.

To preserve and generate cultural traditions, financial support plays an vital role.Because without any economical support the cultural organizations will be unable to organize much cultural events and as a result to get more people's attention.People of major cities are more pragmatic for their real life problems such as accomodations, education, lifestyle etc. They generally have a perfunctory thinkig about cultural traditions.

On the other hand, if people of rural areas and small cities care more about the traditions of the society that are being maintained from years. In term of generating cultural traditions, people of rural areas also advanced as compare to the people of major cities.

Again,there is a large portion of the population of a country live in non major cities. So, if more finencial supports a given to major cities only. then rural areas will get less opportunities to thrive and also create an noncoherent cultural society. People of large cities will be more advanced whereas other parts of the country will remain way behind.

if government's economical support is only limited to major cities, then people of remaining parts of the country will be more willing to move to these large cities. As a result, the population of these cities will be increase more rapidly.

in conclusion, governments have to give equal importance to grow cultural tradition and to preserve them among the people.Without equal finecial support, the traditions that are preserved and celebrated only in rural areas will face a threat to its existence.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, then, whereas, in conclusion, such as, as a result, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 19.5258426966 51% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 12.4196629213 56% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 14.8657303371 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 11.3162921348 18% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 8.0 33.0505617978 24% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 58.6224719101 65% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 12.9106741573 54% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1324.0 2235.4752809 59% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 250.0 442.535393258 56% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.296 5.05705443957 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97635364384 4.55969084622 87% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93901752291 2.79657885939 105% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 215.323595506 59% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.512 0.4932671777 104% => OK
syllable_count: 430.2 704.065955056 61% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 6.24550561798 16% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 20.2370786517 54% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 23.0359550562 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 88.8373013756 60.3974514979 147% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.363636364 118.986275619 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7272727273 23.4991977007 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.54545454545 5.21951772744 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 7.80617977528 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.13820224719 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.212127610746 0.243740707755 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0893229476425 0.0831039109588 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.047080614133 0.0758088955206 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12711103481 0.150359130593 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0382697193625 0.0667264976115 57% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 14.1392134831 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 48.8420337079 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 12.1743820225 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.76 12.1639044944 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.64 8.38706741573 103% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 100.480337079 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 11.8971910112 126% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 11.2143820225 96% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.7820224719 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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