Claim: It is no longer possible for a society to regard any living man or woman as a hero.
Reason: The reputation of anyone who is subjected to media scrutiny will eventually be diminished.
In today's world, it is nearly impossible for anyone to be in good books of media for a long period. Eventually a phase comes where the person makes even a diminutive mistake, the media immediately arrives and criticizes the person such that they tend to lose their self-confidence. With the advancement in technology, new types of media is emerging, such as social media, podcasts. For example: A cricketer who is playing a world cup match and due to his slow innings the team loses the match, the player has to not only face the media at the post match conference, but also face criticisms in social media such as Facebook, Twitter. this severe criticism plays an important role in shaping the individual's next course of action.
Some people take the criticism in a good way and work very hard in achieving their goals. Moreover, they prefer to stay out of limelight to make sure they are in a good frame of mind. On the contrary, other set of people take the criticism in a wrong way and do something which is totally not required at that moment. It's important that one displays a calm and composed attitude while facing the media and not get terrified by them. "Keep the media as your friend and not your enemy", Kapil Dev, world cup winning captain once said in an interview. The media is always misconstrued to be on the negative side which is not always the case. if a person who is true to his/her work and has never done anything wrong, there is no reason the media will try to demean them, instead they will treat them as role models whom the youngsters of the nation should look up to. there have been cases where a person is guilty of committing a crime, the media is obviously the first one to target them and later if he/she is vindicated, they are the ones who make sure the message is communicated to the entire nation.
Therefore, its important not to blame media in this context, as they are doing their duty of spreading news that occur around the world. At the same time, media has to make sure they present the correct information with right facts and not deceive the common public.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, look, moreover, so, therefore, while, as to, for example, such as, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 19.5258426966 92% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 12.4196629213 24% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 14.8657303371 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.3162921348 106% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 33.0505617978 91% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 58.6224719101 75% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 12.9106741573 31% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1739.0 2235.4752809 78% => OK
No of words: 380.0 442.535393258 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.57631578947 5.05705443957 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41515443553 4.55969084622 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48248574156 2.79657885939 89% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 215.323595506 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.547368421053 0.4932671777 111% => OK
syllable_count: 547.2 704.065955056 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59117977528 88% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.2370786517 74% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 23.0359550562 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.5984940777 60.3974514979 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.933333333 118.986275619 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.3333333333 23.4991977007 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.93333333333 5.21951772744 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.97078651685 60% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 7.80617977528 51% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 5.13820224719 136% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.136453249585 0.243740707755 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0453457848412 0.0831039109588 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0450974377905 0.0758088955206 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.086788286969 0.150359130593 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0381604328342 0.0667264976115 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 14.1392134831 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.02 48.8420337079 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 12.1743820225 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.58 12.1639044944 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.03 8.38706741573 96% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 100.480337079 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.8971910112 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 11.2143820225 107% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.7820224719 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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