Government officials and politicians are bound to think of the welfare of their people. Their decisions should not only help its citizens but also try to be helpful for a peaceful world. The public decisions often fail to consider the broader aspect of the result. Given the abundance of resources the government officials have, the people have a weaker hand in making decisions. Thus the government officials are the ones who should take the major policy decisions.
Politicians and government officials are well aware of the conditions prevailing at the regional as well as international level. They are well informed about the world politics. When certain policy decisions are made, every aspect of the politics is taken into consideration. If general public is allowed to make decisions, the chance of those causing harm is more than that of development. People tend to think about only their locality, some may think only about the issues concerning their own family. Government on the other hand plans for everyone. For example, consider a government decides to implement an economic reform throughout the country. The decision seems to the people as a useless one and hence people speak against it. They are concerned about their daily expenses that would get affected. But the government knows that the international political conditions in existence would significantly improve the country's economy and in-turn help the people. Such policies, if implemented by taking public opinion are certain to hinder the growth of the country.
Government officials and politicians also consider the past while making certain decisions. They study the similar events occurred in the past and try to decide their views for a current scenario by evaluating previous ones. General public on the other hand have a tendency to overlook the history and focus more on the present. Further, the government has experts in the concerned fields. Their experiences, studies and understanding of the issue at hand helps a lot while formulating certain policies. General public are deprived of the experience and the understanding and thus are ineffective while making such decisions. For example, certain group of people demands for educational reform in the society. The public suggest reserving some seats for the poor in the country. The government experts predict an economic boom in the country, and forecast an improvement in the wealth of the society. The government sees the suggestion as a bleak since after the economic growth everyone could afford better education. If the government would have listened to the public, it might have resulted in an unfruitful decision and might have the government a lot.
Thus, major policy decisions should be left for the politicians and government officials.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...to hinder the growth of the country. Government officials and politicians als...
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...t scenario by evaluating previous ones. General public on the other hand have a tendency to ov...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, look, may, so, thus, well, while, for example, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 19.5258426966 72% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 12.4196629213 81% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 14.8657303371 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.3162921348 44% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 33.0505617978 51% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 58.6224719101 90% => OK
Nominalization: 23.0 12.9106741573 178% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2358.0 2235.4752809 105% => OK
No of words: 444.0 442.535393258 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.31081081081 5.05705443957 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.5903493882 4.55969084622 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80338010643 2.79657885939 100% => OK
Unique words: 206.0 215.323595506 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.463963963964 0.4932671777 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 738.0 704.065955056 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.99550561798 160% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.38483146067 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 28.0 20.2370786517 138% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 23.0359550562 65% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.1758184091 60.3974514979 43% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 84.2142857143 118.986275619 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.8571428571 23.4991977007 67% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.5 5.21951772744 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 7.80617977528 141% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 10.2758426966 136% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 5.13820224719 117% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.83258426966 166% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.314969151532 0.243740707755 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0882387427633 0.0831039109588 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0833068699919 0.0758088955206 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.250789270055 0.150359130593 167% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0883689473162 0.0667264976115 132% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 14.1392134831 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 48.8420337079 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 12.1743820225 85% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.22 12.1639044944 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.97 8.38706741573 95% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 100.480337079 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.8971910112 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 11.2143820225 71% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.7820224719 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.