Young people are the future of any society. They are the ones responsible for the development of their society and its people. These young people are mainly motivated by their elders, parents or the role-models of the society. Thus, the society's contemporary can be understood by the trends in the thoughts of the young people. However, this may not be true everytime.
Young crowd of a society is the driving force behind the development of the society. These young people strive hard for the well-being of their society.Their actions are in sync with those of their elders-parents or other members of the society-who have contributed to the society in a positive manner. If one studies the actions of the elder leaders or representative of the society, the trends of the youth can be predicted with significant accuracy. For instance, a town in India popularly known as 'military village'had atleast one member of the family served in the defence forces of that country. This tradition is still extant and it can be easily predicted that the young members of the society are still pursuing the dream of serving the nation. Such examples are well observed around the globe. These trends may get slightly changed according to the advancing of the world, but are predictable.
These may not be true at all the times though. The conditions of the region may not remain the same over the years. For example, the social atmosphere may alter the choice of the young ones to study abroad rather than to study in their own country like their parents. In such cases it may get difficult to analyze the trends. Due to the advancement in technologies and science, the young people are exposed to vast information. They may use this information and few of them might prefer to walk on a path which is unknown in their society. This shift in the trend is unpredictable. Thus, studying these trends for understanding the culture of the society would be anything but effective.
All the points discussed above point to the fact that in certain cases the youth are motivated by the events outside their society. It may be possible that some young people in socities still follow the footsteps of their elder. Thus, the most effective way for understanding the contemporary of the socities may or may not depend on the trends of the society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, may, so, still, thus, well, for example, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 19.5258426966 108% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 12.4196629213 121% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 14.8657303371 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.3162921348 53% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 31.0 33.0505617978 94% => OK
Preposition: 59.0 58.6224719101 101% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 12.9106741573 70% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1935.0 2235.4752809 87% => OK
No of words: 398.0 442.535393258 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.86180904523 5.05705443957 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46653527281 4.55969084622 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71313624895 2.79657885939 97% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 215.323595506 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.467336683417 0.4932671777 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 599.4 704.065955056 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 6.24550561798 176% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.99550561798 140% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.2370786517 114% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 23.0359550562 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 44.2281419961 60.3974514979 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.1304347826 118.986275619 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3043478261 23.4991977007 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.08695652174 5.21951772744 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 7.80617977528 102% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.2758426966 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.83258426966 166% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.101972655801 0.243740707755 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0335441538907 0.0831039109588 40% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0433650736392 0.0758088955206 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0737493426036 0.150359130593 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0236019175638 0.0667264976115 35% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 14.1392134831 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 48.8420337079 128% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 12.1743820225 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.61 12.1639044944 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.89 8.38706741573 94% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 100.480337079 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.8971910112 63% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 11.2143820225 78% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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