Claim: Many problems of modern society cannot be solved by laws and the legal system.
Reason: Laws cannot change what is in people's hearts or minds.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the
claim and the reason on which that claim is based.
It has been claimed that laws and legal system is unable to solve many problems of modern society
on the basis of the reasoning that it is not possible to change people's perception by laws. Though in
reality many problems actually can not be solved by legal system, I do not think that the reasoning is
perfect. Laws and proper implementation of those may lead to behaviorial change and actually
thange feelings and perception towards most of the things.
We nare living in a technologically advanced and fast growing and ever changing society. There is
almost huge amount of solutions to nearly every problems we face. But we have been presented
with latest and more complex issues everyday. As a part of human nature, we always try to push
forward our level of knowledge and ability. This trait is making our life more comfortable day by day
but also imposing threats we are not even ready for. For example, invention of coal based power
plant provides cheap electricity but it is causing great harm to the environment. Now researchers are
trying hard to save the world from the threats imposed to the atmosphere and environment. Same
case for social media. Though it started as a mean for bringing people close from all over the world
but in reality it has turned into addiction and indicted as a major reason behing flagging social
relationship and bonding.
It has been stated that laws and legal system fails to solve many of these modern problems as rules
and regulation can't change peoples feeling, emotion and perception. But in reality laws cange
change attitude toward anything so mfast than any other means. As a law is introduced and starts to
be implemented widely, it automatically produces mass concern that something must be wrong with
the stuff. People statrts to get aware and conscious about the stuff concerning new rules. It tens to
change attitude people's perspective toward the matter.
Even if the laws fail to introduce self-conciousness among the people, it's proper implementation
will force people to change their perception. If the legal system imposes large amount of fines for
environment pollution, manufacturers will be forced to adapt more environment friendly processes
of production.
However, imposing regulations may backfire and even fail to succeed in case of improper
implementation. For example, if laws are made to regulate social media usage time, there is no
gurantee that it will meet it's goal since people can use VPN or other browsing technologies to
bypass the monitoring.Finally, it is quite imposiible to solve all the problems by only rules and regulations. But most of the
problems can be addressed by laws and legal system. Laws hold the ability to change perception
toward any matter dramatically. But people's perception toward the law is also important. If people
respect the law and proper implementation of laws are possible, then most of our modern problems
can be soved by legal system as they can play the role of catalyst to change behaviorial aspects by
changing people's perception toward any problems.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: On
...solve many problems of modern society on the basis of the reasoning that it is n...
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...e to change peoples perception by laws. Though in reality many problems actually can...
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... I do not think that the reasoning is perfect. Laws and proper implementation of thos...
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Suggestion: Thange
...ad to behaviorial change and actually thange feelings and perception towards most of...
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...g and ever changing society. There is almost huge amount of solutions to nearly ever...
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...s we face. But we have been presented with latest and more complex issues everyday...
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Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...d with latest and more complex issues everyday. As a part of human nature, we always t...
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Suggestion: Forward
...f human nature, we always try to push forward our level of knowledge and ability. Thi...
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... our life more comfortable day by day but also imposing threats we are not even r...
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Suggestion: Plant
...xample, invention of coal based power plant provides cheap electricity but it is ca...
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Suggestion: Trying
... the environment. Now researchers are trying hard to save the world from the threats...
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... the atmosphere and environment. Same case for social media. Though it started as ...
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...a major reason behing flagging social relationship and bonding. It has been stated that ...
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Suggestion: And
...any of these modern problems as rules and regulation cant change peoples feeling,...
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Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...dern problems as rules and regulation cant change peoples feeling, emotion and per...
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Suggestion: Change
...perception. But in reality laws cange change attitude toward anything so mfast than ...
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Suggestion: The
...ern that something must be wrong with the stuff. People statrts to get aware and ...
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Suggestion: Change
...tuff concerning new rules. It tens to change attitude peoples perspective toward the...
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Suggestion: Will
...the people, its proper implementation will force people to change their perception...
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Suggestion: Of
...t more environment friendly processes of production. However, imposing regulat...
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Suggestion: Implementation
...n fail to succeed in case of improper implementation. For example, if laws are made to regul...
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Suggestion: Bypass
...VPN or other browsing technologies to bypass the monitoring.Finally, it is quite imp...
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Suggestion: Finally
...technologies to bypass the monitoring.Finally, it is quite imposiible to solve all th...
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Suggestion: Problems
...ules and regulations. But most of the problems can be addressed by laws and legal syst...
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Suggestion: Toward
...hold the ability to change perception toward any matter dramatically. But peoples pe...
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...ption toward the law is also important. If people respect the law and proper imp...
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Suggestion: Changing
...lyst to change behaviorial aspects by changing peoples perception toward any problems....
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, finally, however, if, may, so, then, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 19.5258426966 118% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 12.4196629213 89% => OK
Conjunction : 28.0 14.8657303371 188% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.3162921348 53% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 32.0 33.0505617978 97% => OK
Preposition: 65.0 58.6224719101 111% => OK
Nominalization: 21.0 12.9106741573 163% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2651.0 2235.4752809 119% => OK
No of words: 510.0 442.535393258 115% => OK
Chars per words: 5.19803921569 5.05705443957 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.75217629947 4.55969084622 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86013579715 2.79657885939 102% => OK
Unique words: 258.0 215.323595506 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.505882352941 0.4932671777 103% => OK
syllable_count: 807.3 704.065955056 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 6.24550561798 160% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 8.0 3.10617977528 258% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 7.0 1.77640449438 394% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.2370786517 124% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 23.0359550562 87% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.7025121045 60.3974514979 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.04 118.986275619 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4 23.4991977007 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.76 5.21951772744 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 33.0 4.97078651685 664% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 27.0 7.80617977528 346% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 5.13820224719 175% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.83258426966 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.267926957672 0.243740707755 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0808326326461 0.0831039109588 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0855938034195 0.0758088955206 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0719758678446 0.150359130593 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0803244169712 0.0667264976115 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 14.1392134831 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 48.8420337079 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 12.1743820225 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.88 12.1639044944 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.25 8.38706741573 98% => OK
difficult_words: 117.0 100.480337079 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.8971910112 88% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 11.2143820225 89% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.