College and university education should be free for all students, fully financed by the government.
Some people claim that governments should make college and university education free for all students. On the contrary, other people are sure that governments will be worse off if they offer free education. Undoubtedly, the statement given is rather controversial; however, a closer examination reveals that not only governments but also students from all around the world will be better off if there is a possibility to study without paying fees.
To begin with, everybody has a right to pursue their studies. However, it is known that a huge part of citizens in the majority of countries cannot afford to obtain an education which is non-paid. We can look at Gini coefficient that shows a rate of inequality in almost each country. The results reveal that only a few countries can be called lands with a low inequality among people. That means that there is a horrible number of individuals all around the world who have no chance to earn enough money to cover all the fees for education. Meanwhile, many talented and genial people are raised in low-income families. If their abilities are not developed, the world will get fewer and fewer people who could make new inventions and raise countries’ economies, and technologies. New talents are one of the reasons why education should be free worldwide.
Another reason in support of my opinion is international students. Nowadays more and more countries have a wish to get the best students so they could bring useful knowledge. However, the best education requires an enormous amount of money. Also, it is a common thing when universities make a more significant fee for overseas students. Therefore, countries lose a chance to get the best brains because of an unbelievable cost of education, which is impossible to cover for a myriad of international students even if they have an excellent academic performance.
Education fees may have some benefits, too. Universities can spend money on new equipment, laboratories, libraries and students’ accommodation. Also, there would be a possibility to pay the best students scholarships. However, all these things can be made without taking money from students. Many governments can afford to support a wide range of universities. Grants, subsidiaries will help universities to accumulate enough money to be able to teach free. That could be achieved if governments paid more attention to the way they distribute their resources.
Finally, free education will create a competition among prospective students. Undoubtedly, there is no chance that universities will be able to teach everyone for free; therefore, they will admit a limited number of students. Such a policy will make young people study hard and strive for the best grades and achievements so they could be accepted in the best educational institutes. Governments will also be better off, as they will get high-qualified graduates who will perform well on their jobs.
Once there are arguments to be made for both sides, it is clear that free education has more advantages than paid one. Both students and governments will be better off if there is a possibility to study free.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, however, if, look, may, so, therefore, well, while, on the contrary, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 29.0 19.5258426966 149% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 26.0 12.4196629213 209% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 11.0 14.8657303371 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 11.3162921348 150% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 33.0505617978 85% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 58.6224719101 90% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 12.9106741573 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2654.0 2235.4752809 119% => OK
No of words: 512.0 442.535393258 116% => OK
Chars per words: 5.18359375 5.05705443957 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.75682846001 4.55969084622 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02847005258 2.79657885939 108% => OK
Unique words: 240.0 215.323595506 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.46875 0.4932671777 95% => OK
syllable_count: 837.0 704.065955056 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 29.0 20.2370786517 143% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 23.0359550562 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 45.2742731554 60.3974514979 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.5172413793 118.986275619 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6551724138 23.4991977007 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.51724137931 5.21951772744 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 7.80617977528 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 22.0 10.2758426966 214% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.296605436302 0.243740707755 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0893164375257 0.0831039109588 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0967206749163 0.0758088955206 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.17752753841 0.150359130593 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0574950563623 0.0667264976115 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 14.1392134831 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 48.8420337079 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 12.1743820225 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 12.1639044944 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.72 8.38706741573 92% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 100.480337079 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.8971910112 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 11.2143820225 78% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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