Colleges and universities should require their students to spend at least one semester studying in a foreign country.
Should students need to go abroad for studying at the foreign country? Generally, many people say that diverse experience will help student enhance their ability to get better. So, they recommend to go abroad and experience various thing as far as possible. At first glance, the statement above appears to be somewhat convincing, but further reflection reveals that it omits some important faults in addressing this issue. Studying in a foreign country is not available for all students. Addition to this, learning in America could be the best way to elevate ability of student rather than in foreign university.
To further illustration of their position, studying abroad can benefit many students. Admittedly, a diverse experience which can not undergo in native land will dilate vision of students.
However, to go foreign country, students need a lot of money. But, they are not able to afford quite considerable money for studying overseas. For example, assume that one student go to Japan for learning about japanese culture. He needs to pay tuition which costs 5000 dollars a year. In addition to this, he should have more money for food and house. He can eke out a living when we spend 1000 dollars a month. people might say there are some programs which assist fiscal problem, but these scholarships cannot deal with all students when assuming that all students should go overseas.
Moreover, there are some students who do not need to go abroad for their study. Their superb circumstance for their study could be in their country. Then, it is just a costly option to go abroad, also it would not be efficacious. For example, many connoisseurs in the field of topology are in Japan. Besides, many coursebooks for topology is in. Then, should students in japanese university go for studying abroad? Most people will judge not to do. Studying in Japan is a paramout way to study topology for students in area of topology.
To sum up, studying abroad is one of the excellent choice to enlarge your sight, though it is worthless and unaffordable to some students. So universities should not require to all of their students. In addition, Many people regard studying abroad as turning point that enhance your life better, but it could culminate in just squandering money. Because Studying overseas has many advantages and weakness, pondering over this issue is required.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 187, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'recommend going', 'recommend gonna'.
Suggestion: recommend going; recommend gonna
...e their ability to get better. So, they recommend to go abroad and experience various thing as ...
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Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e land will dilate vision of students. However, to go foreign country, student...
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Line 5, column 415, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: People
...ing when we spend 1000 dollars a month. people might say there are some programs which...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, however, if, moreover, so, then, for example, in addition, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 19.5258426966 77% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 20.0 12.4196629213 161% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 14.8657303371 47% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.3162921348 97% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 33.0505617978 91% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 58.6224719101 85% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 12.9106741573 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1993.0 2235.4752809 89% => OK
No of words: 394.0 442.535393258 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05837563452 5.05705443957 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.45527027702 4.55969084622 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65096268048 2.79657885939 95% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 215.323595506 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.505076142132 0.4932671777 102% => OK
syllable_count: 611.1 704.065955056 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 27.0 20.2370786517 133% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 23.0359550562 61% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.332833909 60.3974514979 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 73.8148148148 118.986275619 62% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.5925925926 23.4991977007 62% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.51851851852 5.21951772744 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 14.0 4.83258426966 290% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.272530079361 0.243740707755 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0816488848861 0.0831039109588 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.080631856801 0.0758088955206 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148438725632 0.150359130593 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0482677508616 0.0667264976115 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 14.1392134831 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 48.8420337079 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 12.1743820225 72% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.48 12.1639044944 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.18 8.38706741573 98% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 100.480337079 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.8971910112 71% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 11.2143820225 68% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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