All parents should be required to volunteer time to their children's schools.
Volunteer work is what people help other people spontaneously without any lucrative purpose. Many experts say that volunteer work make quality of study of their offsprings better. And they expect that participation of family can cause more comfortable for students in school. But I don't agree with this statement. There are some parents who can't afford to assist school because they have to work late to sustain their family. Also, since mandatory volunteer is not authentic meaning of volunteer, unwillingness will undermine their performance than it's expectation.
Admittedly, taking part in school events and works will produce more familiar and natural mood which can enhance quality of education. Parents can open extra-curriculum like sports, arts which teachers are not adept at. And these chances will give children more variety experience for students.
However, Not all parents are available for put aside their time for their children. These days, There are many parents who both work. Moreover, they need to use time for
Even though they don't have enough time and money to spend their kids' school, should they need to spare their time for school. The answer will be absolutely not. Education is one of the most important thing in family, but there is no reason education ought to be paramount value to all family. For example, assume student who has sick grandparents. In this situation, priority of his family would be health of their grandparents. His parents can't dedicate their time for his school.
Furthermore, if they should go to school and help their school works despite parents don't want to assist their school, parents' unwillingness for help can make even poor grade of education than they don't help.
To sum up, obligatory participation for their children's school will surely enhance the quality of education and development of their children. Nevertheless, for the reasons that not all family is in circumstance they can spend their time for their childrens' school, and lack of spontaneousness will discriminate their intended performance, volunteer work has not to be required to all parents.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, moreover, nevertheless, so, then, for example, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 19.5258426966 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 12.4196629213 137% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 14.8657303371 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.3162921348 71% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 36.0 33.0505617978 109% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 58.6224719101 63% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 12.9106741573 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1794.0 2235.4752809 80% => OK
No of words: 340.0 442.535393258 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.27647058824 5.05705443957 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29407602571 4.55969084622 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77754216609 2.79657885939 99% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 215.323595506 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.508823529412 0.4932671777 103% => OK
syllable_count: 536.4 704.065955056 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.77640449438 281% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.2370786517 99% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 23.0359550562 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 55.0204280245 60.3974514979 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.7 118.986275619 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0 23.4991977007 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.65 5.21951772744 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 7.80617977528 102% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.83258426966 145% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.316301800983 0.243740707755 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0983783889802 0.0831039109588 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0897114080239 0.0758088955206 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.185269803515 0.150359130593 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0953583734321 0.0667264976115 143% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 14.1392134831 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 48.8420337079 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 12.1743820225 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 12.1639044944 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.92 8.38706741573 94% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 100.480337079 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.8971910112 59% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.8 11.2143820225 78% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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