Colleges and universities should require their students to spend at least one semester studying in a foreign country.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the recommendation and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, describe specific circumstances in which adopting the recommendation would or would not be advantageous and explain how these examples shape your position.
Student life is the most important part of a person because he get to learn and experience new things that wont be taught to him by anyone it would be a new experience and will explore things on its own, many famous personalities have got into big startups and new ideas while they were studying. The idea of competing itself makes a person do hardwork and get big achievements in their life. The most competitive species of nature has humans on top of it. As soon as he gets into a competition he will start planning on how to win over this situation and will gather information and start studying on the subject to perform well.
Student life gives an opportunity to a student to learn new things so while they are studying an idea of them spending a semester in a foreign university is a bright idea that way they would get a chance to learn the new environment and away from home will let them concentrate more as they would not get distracted anyway as they just have a goal to achieve. The experience of them getting a big opportunity like these would help they to think about their future if they want to pursue their higher studies away from home as they would get a brief experience on what they might to going through in that period.For example universities have now started a program that allows student to be a part of student exchange program where they get a chance to study and learn different culture.They have to study their with the expert of the subject they might be pursuing in their field of study that would help them get better understanding and let them explore and evolve as a better student.
The opportunity of getting to study for a semester in foreign country will make student get into a practical experience on how their life would turn up away from home. They might feel homesick but that would be an ice-breaker if they want to pursue their higher studies in a foreign university as he would have already been to an university where he had learn something new different from the student they were studying with. They would already been in a place where in the initial period you get homesickness and feel like going home but they have experienced it already and know how to get rid of that feeling and best thing is that if a student who wants to pursue his studies in a foreign country who is very shy might get a chance to experience how would he behave and how to cope up with that behavior.
However getting an opportunity big like these might be a bad sign for their own country as their student is spending his resources in a foreign country.Moreover the cost of studying in a foreign university for a semester is very high and would not be affordable to everyone and specially if a student who is well deserving but is not financially capable wont be able to experience and some students who is not academically strong might get a chance just because he is economically stable
To sum up, studying in a foreign university for a semester is very advantageous as it gives student a chance to experience weather he might be able to survive if he wants to pursue higher education or not. While their are some negative aspects such as financial capabilities but the positive aspects cover up the dark side and all in all is an exxcellent experience to be a part of the program.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 64, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'gets'.
Suggestion: gets
...t important part of a person because he get to learn and experience new things that...
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Line 3, column 284, Rule ID: COMP_THAN[1]
Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
...rom home will let them concentrate more as they would not get distracted anyway as...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: For
...y might to going through in that period.For example universities have now started a...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: They
...ce to study and learn different culture.They have to study their with the expert of ...
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Line 5, column 329, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...ersity as he would have already been to an university where he had learn something...
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Line 5, column 356, Rule ID: HAD_VBP[1]
Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'learned', 'learnt'.
Suggestion: learned; learnt
...eady been to an university where he had learn something new different from the studen...
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Line 5, column 356, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'learned', 'learnt'.
Suggestion: learned; learnt
...eady been to an university where he had learn something new different from the studen...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
... how to cope up with that behavior. However getting an opportunity big like these m...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Moreover
...ding his resources in a foreign country.Moreover the cost of studying in a foreign unive...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Moreover,
...ding his resources in a foreign country.Moreover the cost of studying in a foreign unive...
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Line 7, column 306, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...everyone and specially if a student who is well deserving but is not financially capable wont be ...
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Line 7, column 488, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e just because he is economically stable To sum up, studying in a foreign univers...
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Line 9, column 213, Rule ID: THEIR_IS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'there'?
Suggestion: there
...o pursue higher education or not. While their are some negative aspects such as finan...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
anyway, but, however, if, moreover, so, well, while, for example, such as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 28.0 19.5258426966 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 24.0 12.4196629213 193% => OK
Conjunction : 23.0 14.8657303371 155% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.3162921348 141% => OK
Pronoun: 63.0 33.0505617978 191% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 80.0 58.6224719101 136% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 12.9106741573 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2724.0 2235.4752809 122% => OK
No of words: 602.0 442.535393258 136% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.52491694352 5.05705443957 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.95335121839 4.55969084622 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6396221726 2.79657885939 94% => OK
Unique words: 220.0 215.323595506 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.365448504983 0.4932671777 74% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 868.5 704.065955056 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59117977528 88% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 20.2370786517 54% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 54.0 23.0359550562 234% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 195.520327197 60.3974514979 324% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 247.636363636 118.986275619 208% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 54.7272727273 23.4991977007 233% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 7.63636363636 5.21951772744 146% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 7.80617977528 167% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.13820224719 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.140104337909 0.243740707755 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0634532594007 0.0831039109588 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0511051805179 0.0758088955206 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0982610081463 0.150359130593 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0442928259726 0.0667264976115 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 27.2 14.1392134831 192% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.59 48.8420337079 69% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 22.0 12.1743820225 181% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.82 12.1639044944 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.36 8.38706741573 100% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 100.480337079 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.8971910112 113% => OK
gunning_fog: 23.6 11.2143820225 210% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 24.0 11.7820224719 204% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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