Colleges and universities should require their students to spend at least one semester studying in a foreign country.

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Colleges and universities should require their students to spend at least one semester studying in a foreign country.

Colleges and universities prepare the students for their work-space academically as well as professionally. They have the necessary resources that is need to gain knowledge and work ethics needed for our employment that is needed in jobs. I agree with the author that colleges and universities should send their students to study abroad atleast for one semester, but i believe there are certain recommendations.

First, when students are send abroad for a semester to pursue the major he is already studying in existing universities he gets to learn a lot from this experience. For instance, I majored in Mechanical Engineering from MRIU university and got the opportunity to study abroad in University of Tokyo, Japan as my seventh semester. Academically, I learned that about the softwares like solidwords design and ansys 5.0 simulations which were not taught in my home country. There were a discrepency in the study of teaching when compared to MRIU as there it is expected to work 12 hours of self study after classes per week. I have not encountered this before but got use to this schedule which greatly helped me a lot in keeping up with the pace of the studies. Also, I was had an opportunity of 2 week training program in Yamaha.Inc where I learned about the "efficiency operational Processes" like Kaizen and Six-Sigma which increase my scope of learning in mechanical operations. Upon my graduation when I started applying for jobs I successfully cleaner the interview rounds from many top-notch companies as I have the knowledge ahead of what they expect for a fresh graduate will have and also I have the letter of recommendation from the University of Tokyo. Hence, in my view, attending a semester abroad in a good university will bolster the knowledge of the subject and reflects an extra factor in the resume.

Secondly, student get to know the culture of the country he visit. Upon my arival in tokyo, everything seems different at once as I belong to India and India is a developing country. Traffic rules and pedestrian rules were totally different then what I followed in my homeland and also there is a provision to follow rules strictly. Japanese were really punchul of time and even 2 minutes of delay seems to be a problem for them which helped me to understand how to be efficient. Also, there is a difference of prices of food and transportation from India which gave me a good lesson of money management. I get to interect with the students from Europe and America along with japanese which was absent in my home institution as it is not a interactions institution. Therefore, it is likely that student get to learn a lot about living and culture apart from education when going to another country.

However, As indian universities do not have a hefty budget in order to send every student abroad therfore, they have a criteria of sending only top-notch students abroad. Also ,they organize the yearly examination internally that helps the universities in selection for the candidates who can be send in another country for their education.

In sum, there should not be a provision for the universities to send all the students for studying abroad for a semester but if the universities of any country has a budget then they must act upon this decision.

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Average: 6.6 (1 vote)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, however, if, really, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, well, apart from, for instance, as well as, in my view

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 19.5258426966 108% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 12.4196629213 56% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 14.8657303371 121% => OK
Relative clauses : 18.0 11.3162921348 159% => OK
Pronoun: 51.0 33.0505617978 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 79.0 58.6224719101 135% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 12.9106741573 108% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2750.0 2235.4752809 123% => OK
No of words: 558.0 442.535393258 126% => OK
Chars per words: 4.92831541219 5.05705443957 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.86024933743 4.55969084622 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98501974507 2.79657885939 107% => OK
Unique words: 260.0 215.323595506 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.465949820789 0.4932671777 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 893.7 704.065955056 127% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 6.24550561798 160% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.2370786517 104% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 23.0359550562 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.8081780332 60.3974514979 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.952380952 118.986275619 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.5714285714 23.4991977007 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.61904761905 5.21951772744 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 7.80617977528 141% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.83258426966 207% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.202593809269 0.243740707755 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0683578400481 0.0831039109588 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0726041256516 0.0758088955206 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133201151086 0.150359130593 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0573722466347 0.0667264976115 86% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 14.1392134831 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 48.8420337079 92% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 12.1743820225 110% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.61 12.1639044944 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.55 8.38706741573 102% => OK
difficult_words: 128.0 100.480337079 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.8971910112 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 11.2143820225 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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