Colleges and universities should require their students to spend at least one semester studying in a foreign country.
education system plays an important role in students lives.A weel designed and formulated education system would impart all necessary skills and knowledge to the students for survival in the society.The statement asserts that every college and university must make it compulsory for students spend atleast one semester in a foreign country.I agree with the concept put by the statement as it is important for students to interact with new people and explore various subjects at new place.
The purpose of making it mandatory to spend atleast one semester at a foreign location would benefit student in numerous ways.Since education is not only about acquiring theory or book knowledge but how that knowledge can be relevant to the reality.This can happen only when a student gets to meet different people,interact with them,consider their opinions,sharing ideas and being part of hackspaces and communities.Not only it benefits the subject knowledge,but also enhances soft skills or communication skills that are very much needed today.For instance,if a student is dealing with some complex project that is a hefty one to be completed by a single perosn.In that case,the knowledge he learnt or the bis peers who are part of support communities would assisst him in completing the project.
The education system india could serve as best example on why it is impotant for students to have a experience at a foreign place.Most of the universities and colleges in india lack adequate infrastructure which is a hindrance to many students for carrying out thier researh work or developing projects.For instance,modern technologies like data Sciences and Machine Learning are still in embryonic stage in india,so there is no question of finding good facilities or tools to develop projects in these domains.
Therefore,it could be helpful to students who are restricted by above reasons.
Moreover,introducing more education courses for students in cooperation with universities and colleges in foreign location can be beneficial for underdeveloped countries as it can provide access to knowledge and new tools so it can improve the infrastructure and create more opportunities for students.Furthermore,students who couldn't find job opportunities or feel undervalued for the knowledge or skills they possess obviously have a better chance in trying out in foreign locations.
The statement makes good sense as it provides a way for spreading education all over the world so that students can have better access to facilities and discover their new passions and interests.After all,students are the greatest assets a nation can possess.so it is very much responsibility of government to take this concept forward.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, moreover, so, still, therefore, after all, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 19.5258426966 92% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 12.4196629213 105% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 14.8657303371 148% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.3162921348 97% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 33.0505617978 79% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 58.6224719101 90% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 12.9106741573 147% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2303.0 2235.4752809 103% => OK
No of words: 419.0 442.535393258 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.49642004773 5.05705443957 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.52432199235 4.55969084622 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.46673478462 2.79657885939 124% => OK
Unique words: 224.0 215.323595506 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.534606205251 0.4932671777 108% => OK
syllable_count: 715.5 704.065955056 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.99550561798 120% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 20.2370786517 30% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 69.0 23.0359550562 300% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 215.858557085 60.3974514979 357% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 383.833333333 118.986275619 323% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 69.8333333333 23.4991977007 297% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 13.8333333333 5.21951772744 265% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 28.0 7.80617977528 359% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 10.2758426966 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.13820224719 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.210725832613 0.243740707755 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105896021393 0.0831039109588 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0626920933257 0.0758088955206 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105896021393 0.150359130593 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0626920933257 0.0667264976115 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 39.4 14.1392134831 279% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -7.02 48.8420337079 -14% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 17.1 7.92365168539 216% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 31.4 12.1743820225 258% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 15.8 12.1639044944 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.47 8.38706741573 137% => OK
difficult_words: 117.0 100.480337079 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 29.5 11.8971910112 248% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 29.6 11.2143820225 264% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 30.0 11.7820224719 255% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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