Competition for high grades seriously limits the quality of learning at all levels of education.Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In dev

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Competition for high grades seriously limits the quality of learning at all levels of education.

Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.

Competition limits the quality of learning at all levels of education, it is true. Today students do hard work for getting high grades in exams at every level of education despite gaining knowledge. The competition is very hard at every level and students put their total energy for completing exams. At same time students ignore other important things which should be considered such as talent and interest. There are different examples and reasoning which support my side in this issue.

Firstly, Because of competition students bound with the limited syllabus which helps to get excellence at any level of education. From primary school level to final college exams student’s emphasis only on the grades as well as parents also appreciate based on marks obtained. As everyone emphasis on the grades and marks the student feels it's his duty to achieve good grades. Only good or high grades cannot help to gain good job the student must have ability for cracking interviews. So, competition should be healthy which leads to students for them excel not just towards marks.

Secondly, in any field or at any level of education student face entrance exam and only good scorer will selected. These types of competition emphasis on the theoretical knowledge and ignore the practical skills. In India to become engineer students appeared for JEE mains and advance level exams and they studied complete theoretical knowledge of science. The student wants to become engineer has good reasoning skills but lack in exams with few marks than it will be very tough for that student. At same place a student has little aptitude to become engineer but good in theoretical knowledge then he will be selected. On comparing both cases the student must face competition to fulfill dreams. So many students get depressed due to competition and it will decrease the skills of student.

Thirdly, I observed in schools working as a counselor that students read full syllabus and learn it by heart, but they did not try to understand the text books for future. They all work hard to get good marks and grades only which gives them temporary happiness. Today everyone wants a lot of appreciation and students feel that if we get good marks then parents and teacher surely appreciate us. The competition is good when it is healthy and motivate students, but it becomes caustic if it decreases the skills of students.

Finally, since reasons we can conclude that the competition for higher grades bound student's quality of learning at all levels of education. Education should be free from competitions at least up to higher school to build students good learning capacity.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 346, Rule ID: IT_IS[17]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
... the grades and marks the student feels its his duty to achieve good grades. Only g...
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Line 5, column 106, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'select'
Suggestion: select
...entrance exam and only good scorer will selected. These types of competition emphasis on...
^^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, then, third, thirdly, well, at least, such as, as well as, it is true

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 19.5258426966 51% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 12.4196629213 89% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 14.8657303371 135% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.3162921348 88% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 33.0505617978 82% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 58.6224719101 96% => OK
Nominalization: 20.0 12.9106741573 155% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2226.0 2235.4752809 100% => OK
No of words: 440.0 442.535393258 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.05909090909 5.05705443957 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.57997565096 4.55969084622 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6058381688 2.79657885939 93% => OK
Unique words: 216.0 215.323595506 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.490909090909 0.4932671777 100% => OK
syllable_count: 682.2 704.065955056 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.38483146067 182% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.2370786517 114% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 23.0359550562 82% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 24.1911886973 60.3974514979 40% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 96.7826086957 118.986275619 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1304347826 23.4991977007 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.69565217391 5.21951772744 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 10.2758426966 156% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.206169915424 0.243740707755 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0823163963394 0.0831039109588 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0735037521171 0.0758088955206 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.154068634585 0.150359130593 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0706626402114 0.0667264976115 106% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 14.1392134831 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 48.8420337079 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 12.1743820225 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.1639044944 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.84 8.38706741573 93% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 100.480337079 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.8971910112 71% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.2143820225 86% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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