The drawbacks of traditional energy sources mean that they are not a long term solution to the problem of meeting ever increasing energy needs.
There are various energy sources available for industries consumption and individual consumption such as oil, natural gas, hydroelectric, coal and nuclear energy all of which improve the standard of living and make life easier for the world at large. Although these energy sources have multiple advantages, there are certain disadvantages that make them unsustainable in the long term. In my opinion, I mostly agree with the prompt that these energy sources be phased out in favor of alternative sources with less detrimental effects to the world to meet the ever growing economy at large for two reasons.
Firstly, environmental regulations have been put in place to check these energy sources, however these rules can still not outweigh the negative effects of these energy sources on the environment. For instance,Nuclear energy can be regarded as relatively inexpensive with no air or water pollution, it also seems to have an inexhaustible fuel supply. However, this energy source accumulates a lot of nuclear waste that is very expensive to take care of and requires long term storage. Also the accidental release of these nuclear radiation is a blight on the health of the people and environment at large as were seen in the Fukushima in Japan and Chernobyl in Ukraine. Thus, these drawbacks make it an unsuitable energy source for the long term and it should be supplanted by other favorable alternative sources.
Secondly, these energy sources have an adverse effect on human health as well as wildlife despite all the advantages they provide. For example the hydroelectric energy source makes use of damming water sources to create electricity. This exacts pressure on the climate as the hot water is released into the water sources and destroys wildlife and their habitats. Drilling of oil and transportation of oil leads to contamination of land and water sources due to oil spills. An example is the Olobiri of the 1900’s located in the South south part of Nigeria were there was sparse vegetation due to soil contamination and loss of aquatic life and portable water due to oil spillages. All these negative impacts further prove that the present energy sources are not viable in the long term for the growing population.
Lastly, some people may argue that the alternative sources are expensive presently and unreliable such as solar power and wind energy. However these, although they are expensive now, when thought of in the long term prove to be more cost effective and eco friendly then the traditional energy sources that we see today and with more research these alternative sources may be able to cater for the increasing demand for energy sources by the growing population.
In conclusion, the lasting adverse effects of these traditional energy options need to be supplanted by alternative sources to meet the increasing demand by the growing population.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, lastly, may, second, secondly, so, still, then, thus, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 19.5258426966 97% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 12.4196629213 48% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 14.8657303371 121% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.3162921348 71% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 30.0 33.0505617978 91% => OK
Preposition: 60.0 58.6224719101 102% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 12.9106741573 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2431.0 2235.4752809 109% => OK
No of words: 469.0 442.535393258 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.18336886994 5.05705443957 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.65364457471 4.55969084622 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83492779755 2.79657885939 101% => OK
Unique words: 225.0 215.323595506 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.479744136461 0.4932671777 97% => OK
syllable_count: 783.9 704.065955056 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.2370786517 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 23.0359550562 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.1289913309 60.3974514979 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 143.0 118.986275619 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.5882352941 23.4991977007 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0588235294 5.21951772744 193% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 7.80617977528 77% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 5.13820224719 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.334684436198 0.243740707755 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.125136217035 0.0831039109588 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0833650503903 0.0758088955206 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.217493865758 0.150359130593 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0304352097339 0.0667264976115 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.8 14.1392134831 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.61 48.8420337079 73% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 12.1743820225 123% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.06 12.1639044944 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.61 8.38706741573 103% => OK
difficult_words: 108.0 100.480337079 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 11.8971910112 130% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 11.2143820225 114% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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