Educational institutions have a responsibility to dissuade students from pursuing fields of study in which they are unlikely to succeed.Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your rea

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Educational institutions have a responsibility to dissuade students from pursuing fields of study in which they are unlikely to succeed.

Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.

education is very important for each and every individual for better life. The author states that it is the responsibility of the educational institution to guide their students for choosing their field of study.The given topic is highly contentious: some people may go for the topic, but some people stand completely against the given topic. I mostly agree with the given statement for the following reasons.

First of all, students are not aware about the scope of different fields of study. Furthermore, they don't have ideas about the difficulty level of the different fields. Since, educational institution has qualified resource person such as teacher, counselor, they can provide valuable guidelines to their students in choosing the major fields of study. For instance, a student who is poor in the mathematics and in the biological science wants to pursue mbbs (bachelor of science in medicine and surgery), then the likelihood of getting failure is higher than the chance to become success in the that fields, because student who want to study mbbs course should be diligent and hard working; if he choose that field without knowing the the difficulty level of study then his career will be ruined. so, teacher should provide guidelines in choosing the major fields of study.

Similarly, teachers are in contact with their students for long period of the time and they can predict the performance capacity of the students based upon his/her past performance record. so they can provide the valuable insight to their students so that the investment in the fields of study in which they are likely to unsucceed can be prevented. For example, a student want to pursue engineering courses but the teacher knows that his/her mathematics is very bad the it is the responsibility of the teacher to suggest him to change his/her chosen fields, otherwise there may be lost of large amount of money for studying engineering course. so that, teacher should assist them in choosing the major fields of study to prevent loss of large amount of money in the fields of study in which they are likely to unsucceed.

However, all the educational institutions are not filled qualified teachers having knowledge of different fields of study and they may not fully understand the student performance correctly, in that situation, their suggestions may be more detrimental as it directly affect the students career. say, Paras khadka-senior cricket player of Nepal- during his student life , his teacher suggest him to study doctor as he was talent in the study. if, he study doctor, then Nepali people would be unable to find such a best player cricketer. so, while choosing the career, student interest should also considered so that they are more motivated in their interested fields of study and perform better.

In a conclusion, sometimes it is desirable to considered student interest in choosing students major fields of study, educational institutions should provide guidance to their students in choosing major field of study so that the likelihood of spoiling od student career and wastage of money can be prevented.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Education
education is very important for each and every in...
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...dents for choosing their field of study.The given topic is highly contentious: some...
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Suggestion: chooses
...uld be diligent and hard working; if he choose that field without knowing the the dif...
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...f he choose that field without knowing the the difficulty level of study then his care...
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...dy in which they are likely to unsucceed can be prevented. For example, a student...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, may, similarly, so, then, while, for example, for instance, such as, first of all

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 19.5258426966 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 12.4196629213 129% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 14.8657303371 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.3162921348 115% => OK
Pronoun: 45.0 33.0505617978 136% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 72.0 58.6224719101 123% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 12.9106741573 101% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2618.0 2235.4752809 117% => OK
No of words: 508.0 442.535393258 115% => OK
Chars per words: 5.15354330709 5.05705443957 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.74751043592 4.55969084622 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72045911359 2.79657885939 97% => OK
Unique words: 222.0 215.323595506 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.437007874016 0.4932671777 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 800.1 704.065955056 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.2370786517 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 23.0359550562 126% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 103.649295562 60.3974514979 172% => OK
Chars per sentence: 154.0 118.986275619 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.8823529412 23.4991977007 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.35294117647 5.21951772744 141% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 21.0 7.80617977528 269% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.205221335544 0.243740707755 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0777439015452 0.0831039109588 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0412767898394 0.0758088955206 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124681933426 0.150359130593 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0287498959313 0.0667264976115 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.8 14.1392134831 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.04 48.8420337079 86% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 12.1743820225 120% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.18 12.1639044944 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.09 8.38706741573 96% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 100.480337079 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.8971910112 76% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 11.2143820225 121% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.7820224719 119% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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