Educational institutions should actively encourage their students to choose the fields of study.Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and supporting your position, be sure to address

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Educational institutions should actively encourage their students to choose the fields of study.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and supporting your position, be sure to address the most compelling reasons and/or examples that could be used to challenge your position.

While it is desired by the vast majority of individuals that institutions should provide the students with the option to go for their own choice of study, yet there appears to be considerable loopholes to that belief. It is of course very logical that students pursue what interests them more rather than struggling with courses they find difficult or the ones that do little to help them in their careers ahead. This way, they would get more time to invest in their preferred courses that will finally help them achieve their goals. However, this might not always be true of every student. Some might be quite unsure of their passions at the time of choosing a field of study and end up taking the wrong course. This would have devastating effects on the lives of these student and on the society as a whole.

Like Antony Robbins said, “Passion is the genesis of the genius”, any student prodigy who is given the independence to choose his or her line of interest rather than pursuing irrelevant fields of study, are much more likely to succeed in achieving the desired goals. Since passion drives a person to naturally work hard, the student who pursues a desired course of study would be automatically drawn to sedulously devote to his or her studies, as opposed to the one who is forced to take up undesirable subjects. The former ensures that the student lands up in a job that he/she likes, while the later makes it difficult for them to actively chase their dreams, finally rendering them muddled with career choices and in many situations, with poorer scores that hamper their selection in jobs or higher institutes of study.

Besides, passion also ensures that students sustain in their future jobs, with ease. While around the world, there are huge numbers of employees who are dissastisfied with their work, passionate entrepreneurs like Bill Gates and Mark Zuckerberg are living proof of what following passion can lead students to become. Moreover, passion can relate to success in any field besides studies. The world would have been bereft of a tennis legend if Serena Williams was forced to study medicine instead of pursuing her dreams and talent.

While the above is true for students who are clear with their career paths or passions at the time of choosing their field of study, yet there might be students unaware of where their talents lie, or are simply unable to decide what field to choose for a successful future ahead, right at that point. Young, inexperienced students are generally confounded by the raft of options available and even when they might initially have an aim, they might later discover more lucrative fields that they had the knack for, but did not pursue. This presents a depressing situation wherein the students might not have the option to reverse everything from the beginning to pursue the choice they only learnt about later in their lives. Change of mind is very common and if that happens too late in the career of the student, then he/she would have to deal with an unpleasant career path. The student would then end up doing something he/she was never made for. This takes the life and enthusiasm out of individuals and finally leave little joy for the world around them as well.
Besides, as children most students are beguiled by attractive professions like medicine or engineering, but are unaware of the amount of struggle that is involved to become one of those professionals. As a consequence, when students lured by the pay scale or lifestyle of successful professionals in a field, opts to pursue the field and are then unable to cope up with the syllabus or requirements, they are thrown into a state of despair followed by a overwhelming sense of failure. This is hugely evident in the staggering student suicide rates in countries like India for instance, where students aiming for a degree from the prestigious IITs, suddenly face the unyielding syllabuses and the stringent admission testing processes. Till 2015, the IIT suicide rate reached a startling 15000. Sources claim that 90% of the suicides are due to the syllabus pressure felt by the students, and the rest 10% are drop out cases. Hence given these circumstances, it is not prudent to encourage all the students to independently pursue their preferred fields without ensuring that they are aware of the demands and requirements of pursuing the particular field.

Hence, while it is very necessary that a student is given the freedom to choose a preferred field of study, yet thorough counselling and guidance is important in order to direct them to opt for the right decision. This is because, while some students might be very perspicacious and lucid about their talents and ambitions, some others might just misconstrue between their passions and whims. The former category of students will be benefited by the independence in choosing a field, whereas, the second category might be distressed and broken because of wrong career choices. Moreover, a student seeking a single choice might be so engrossed in following the chosen path, that he/she might end up being unaware of the happenings in the rest of the world. Therefore, instead of providing the unrestricted liberty to select a particular field, educational institutes should first provide a preliminary awareness of all the possible fields students can choose from and then proceed to guide and direct them to make the right choice according to their passions, ambitions and liking, while ensuring that they reap the maximum success from the chosen path.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 766, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this student' or 'these students'?
Suggestion: this student; these students
...ave devastating effects on the lives of these student and on the society as a whole. Like...
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Message: A noun should not follow "who". Try changing to a verb or maybe to 'who is a are'.
Suggestion: who is a are
...ld, there are huge numbers of employees who are dissastisfied with their work, passiona...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ight at that point. Young, inexperienced students are generally confounded by the...
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Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
...s, and the rest 10% are drop out cases. Hence given these circumstances, it is not pr...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'besides', 'but', 'finally', 'first', 'hence', 'however', 'if', 'moreover', 'second', 'so', 'then', 'therefore', 'thus', 'well', 'whereas', 'while', 'as for', 'for instance', 'of course']

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.231150793651 0.240241500013 96% => OK
Verbs: 0.161706349206 0.157235817809 103% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0724206349206 0.0880659088768 82% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0595238095238 0.0497285424764 120% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0436507936508 0.0444667217837 98% => OK
Prepositions: 0.132936507937 0.12292977631 108% => OK
Participles: 0.0486111111111 0.0406280797675 120% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.6063018034 2.79330140395 93% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0337301587302 0.030933414821 109% => OK
Particles: 0.00694444444444 0.0016655270985 417% => Less particles wanted.
Determiners: 0.103174603175 0.0997080785238 103% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0238095238095 0.0249443105267 95% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.014880952381 0.0148568991511 100% => OK

Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 5565.0 2732.02544248 204% => OK
No of words: 931.0 452.878318584 206% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.97744360902 6.0361032391 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 5.52379331662 4.58838876751 120% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.3716433942 0.366273622748 101% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.254564983888 0.280924506359 91% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.170784103115 0.200843997647 85% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.106337271751 0.132149295362 80% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6063018034 2.79330140395 93% => OK
Unique words: 417.0 219.290929204 190% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.447905477981 0.48968727796 91% => OK
Word variations: 61.5421220616 55.4138127331 111% => OK
How many sentences: 30.0 20.6194690265 145% => OK
Sentence length: 31.0333333333 23.380412469 133% => OK
Sentence length SD: 82.3945521392 59.4972553346 138% => OK
Chars per sentence: 185.5 141.124799967 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.0333333333 23.380412469 133% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.666666666667 0.674092028746 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.94800884956 121% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.21349557522 96% => OK
Readability: 56.4898317222 51.4728631049 110% => OK
Elegance: 1.55805243446 1.64882698954 94% => OK

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.459838046428 0.391690518653 117% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.134227414463 0.123202303941 109% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0781263898506 0.077325440228 101% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.538228822527 0.547984918172 98% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.135085968062 0.149214159877 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.189278377389 0.161403998019 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0820718922314 0.0892212321368 92% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.490390419238 0.385218514788 127% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.103680883594 0.0692045440612 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.342458222393 0.275328986314 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0532578336511 0.0653680567796 81% => OK

Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 10.4325221239 144% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 13.0 5.30420353982 245% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88274336283 41% => OK
Positive topic words: 15.0 7.22455752212 208% => OK
Negative topic words: 11.0 3.66592920354 300% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 2.70907079646 74% => OK
Total topic words: 28.0 13.5995575221 206% => OK

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Rates: 83.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 6
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