The effectiveness of a country's leaders is best measured by examining the well-being of that country's citizens.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
A Country can describe as a large group of people living legally in a particular area of land. Leaders are those who rule their country and manage citizens living there. They are the main representative of their country and their effectiveness is base on the well being of their citizens.
Leaders have the responsibility to make different policies which can help their citizens to grow. As the government is in the control of the leader and making laws to empower their citizens in terms of money, employment, education etc is the duty of the government and its leader. In many democratic countries, people elect their leaders in the hope of improving their well-being through the policies of the government.
If better the per capita income of a nation then one can say better the quality of life of the citizen of that nation. As per capita income is the average income of the citizen of the country. Better the per capita income of a nation may result in being a developed nation. Many leaders of developed nations get praise all around the world as compared to underdeveloped nations and this is only because of well being of their citizens.
Leaders have responsibilities to make the laws and policies for the citizens, so they are responsible for well -being of their citizens. Their citizen's well-being is the measure of their effectiveness.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...through the policies of the government. If better the per capita income of a natio...
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Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... of life of the citizen of that nation. As per capita income is the average income...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, may, so, then, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 19.5258426966 77% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 12.4196629213 32% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 14.8657303371 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 11.3162921348 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 33.0505617978 54% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 58.6224719101 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 12.9106741573 31% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1127.0 2235.4752809 50% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 230.0 442.535393258 52% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.9 5.05705443957 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89432290496 4.55969084622 85% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83783844363 2.79657885939 101% => OK
Unique words: 106.0 215.323595506 49% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.460869565217 0.4932671777 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 360.9 704.065955056 51% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 6.24550561798 32% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.2370786517 59% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 23.0359550562 82% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.8936507849 60.3974514979 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 93.9166666667 118.986275619 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1666666667 23.4991977007 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.91666666667 5.21951772744 37% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.13820224719 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.163786680104 0.243740707755 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0736311684397 0.0831039109588 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0558406783269 0.0758088955206 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119819980499 0.150359130593 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0580203320129 0.0667264976115 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 14.1392134831 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 48.8420337079 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 12.1743820225 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.14 12.1639044944 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.46 8.38706741573 89% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 100.480337079 42% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.2143820225 86% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 33.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.