A nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college.
Write a response in which you discuss your views on the policy and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider the possible consequences of implementing the policy and explain how these consequences shape your position.
<p class="MsoNormal">The given recommendation is not convincing, as one can say
this statement can't be generalizes for all. If the nations' students should
required to study the same national curriculum until they enter college then it
may rise to many problems.</p><p class="MsoNormal">Let us take an example of India where people of different
state speak different language. If there will be a same national curriculum for
all the students of India, then it may create a problem of understanding the
language because there is no common one single language in this country that
can be understand by all. Most of the people in northern states of India speak
Hindi while the people in southern states do not understand Hindi. So, there
will be a problem of understanding the language of the same national curriculum
for all in the country like India.</p><p class="MsoNormal">By applying the same national curriculum for all students may
also create the problem of too much stress and pressure for the students of
high school. As, before going to college a student must have basic knowledge of
the field of study that he or she would choose in college to know the basic of
field or to verify his or her interest in that field. However, this is not
compulsory but it can benefit them in college. By applying the same national
curriculum, amount of subjects will increase, that may increase the pressure on
the students to study all the subjects with great focus.</p>
<p class="MsoNormal">Thus, given statement is not convincing, as it cannot be
beneficial for the countries like India and it may be harsh for students to
study all the subjects in high school.</p>
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 16, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...vincing, as one can say this statement cant be generalizes for all. If the nations ...
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Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: PRP_PAST_PART[2]
Message: Did you mean 'have required' or 'require'?
Suggestion: have required; require
...or all. If the nations students should required to study the same national curriculum u...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, so, then, thus, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 19.5258426966 51% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 12.4196629213 121% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 14.8657303371 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.3162921348 44% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 33.0505617978 57% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 58.6224719101 65% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 12.9106741573 23% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1471.0 2235.4752809 66% => OK
No of words: 277.0 442.535393258 63% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.31046931408 5.05705443957 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 4.55969084622 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 4.18299247021 2.79657885939 150% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 215.323595506 61% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.476534296029 0.4932671777 97% => OK
syllable_count: 433.8 704.065955056 62% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 20.2370786517 40% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 34.0 23.0359550562 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 98.8543752193 60.3974514979 164% => OK
Chars per sentence: 183.875 118.986275619 155% => OK
Words per sentence: 34.625 23.4991977007 147% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.25 5.21951772744 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 21.0 4.97078651685 422% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 10.2758426966 29% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.215686715502 0.243740707755 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.099123203902 0.0831039109588 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.079635423002 0.0758088955206 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0784389727563 0.150359130593 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0825545117172 0.0667264976115 124% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.9 14.1392134831 148% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.97 48.8420337079 76% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.6 12.1743820225 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.11 12.1639044944 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.77 8.38706741573 93% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 100.480337079 43% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.8971910112 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.6 11.2143820225 139% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.7820224719 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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