Essay topic 1: To understand the most important characteristics of a society, one must study its major cities.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
Human being’s inclination to create his own world led to construct society and gradually expand to cities with their specific history, life styles, cultures, traditions and regulations. Therefore, I agree that one must look into the major cities to comprehend the features of that particular society.
First of all, major cities have historical sites and monuments which reveal history of that community. For instance, tourists visiting Iran commonly go to Persoplis in Shiraz. The remains of this ancient city will assist them to get acquainted with Persian civilization, tradition, lifestyle, and Akhamenid dynasty which are obviously observed in the inscriptions, reliefs, palaces and the architecture of the city. As a result, without visiting such a major city like Shiraz, it would be difficult to grasp the image and the characteristics of Persian society.
Secondly, the markets in major cities indicate the trends of that society. Although most major cities are cosmopolitan and globalization has made them anomalous, residents’ eating habits and dress codes are different. In European societies, people highly consume fast food whereas East Asians usually eat rice as their main dish. In addition, formal clothing is a demand for work and some occasions in major cities; yet, the dress code of indigenous people deserves investigation. Traditional costumes demonstrate the local cultures of communities. To exemplify this, let us consider Kurdish and Turkish people in Iran that often wear their traditional customs in events like wedding, funeral, and family gathering to signify their unity and culture.
However, one may argue that characterizations of a society can be found out by studying the small societies but in the rural or suburban areas it is difficult to explore the tacit habits of locals as there are few people in such areas than major societies. Hence, it would be better to realize a society in major cities with high number of population.
In conclusion, one has to explore important aspects of major cities to fully know their characteristics and implicit regulations rather than small communities.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, hence, however, if, look, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, whereas, as to, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, as a result, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 19.5258426966 51% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 12.4196629213 48% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 14.8657303371 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.3162921348 71% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 33.0505617978 64% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 58.6224719101 80% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 12.9106741573 54% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1827.0 2235.4752809 82% => OK
No of words: 333.0 442.535393258 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.48648648649 5.05705443957 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27180144563 4.55969084622 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01587930136 2.79657885939 108% => OK
Unique words: 203.0 215.323595506 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.60960960961 0.4932671777 124% => OK
syllable_count: 575.1 704.065955056 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.2370786517 74% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 23.0359550562 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.3699108128 60.3974514979 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.8 118.986275619 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2 23.4991977007 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.6 5.21951772744 203% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 7.80617977528 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 10.2758426966 49% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.83258426966 166% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.146244357626 0.243740707755 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0512640172821 0.0831039109588 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.037785685543 0.0758088955206 50% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0829276946836 0.150359130593 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0185737888715 0.0667264976115 28% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 14.1392134831 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 48.8420337079 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 12.1743820225 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.56 12.1639044944 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.23 8.38706741573 122% => OK
difficult_words: 116.0 100.480337079 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.8971910112 97% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 11.2143820225 96% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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