Every individual in a society has a responsibility to obey just laws and to disobey and resist unjust laws.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and supporting your position, be sure to address the most compelling reasons and/or examples that could be used to challenge your position.
The laws of a country bring orderliness to the county. To maintain this orderliness, these laws must be obeyed whether just or unjust, laws are also made to protect us sometimes even from our own ignorance.
One can argue that not all laws of a country are reasonable or just. For instance, a law that says all workers should pay tax of fifteen percent of their salary income, a single mother that earns $1500 monthly is to pay $225 of it for tax when there are other bills to pay, children to feed, fees to pay, gas to buy and so many other things. We can argue that such law is unjust. However, these bills must be paid to enjoy social amenities, like good roads, electricity, water and so on, I suggest the children of the single mother can go to a public school to be eligible for grants and other financial benefits to reduce cost of education.
Moreover, the laws made are not made to put anybody at disadvantage, they are made to maintain orderliness. Imagine a country without laws, or a country that has laws and are not being followed, a country like Nigeria for instance. A country where people believe they are above the law. In Nigeria, a driver must be at least 18 years of age to own a driver’s licence or be behind the wheels of a car, but you see people younger than that from a wealthy family driving round the road, nobody to question them. This is not orderliness.
Also, laws are made to protect us. There’s a law that says a law that says no parking at an area at a particular time, is sometimes made to made to protect us from either ourselves or other dangerous thing that’s likely to happen. The place might be an accident-prone area, it might be known that 80% of the accident that happens on that road is caused by the parking of a vehicle at that spot. But unknown to you the reason of the law, you feel the law is unjust.
In conclusion, the all laws of the land must be obeyed irrespective of the position you are to maintain orderliness
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 138, Rule ID: PHRASE_REPETITION
Message: This phrase is duplicated. You should probably leave only 'made to'.
Suggestion: made to
...area at a particular time, is sometimes made to made to protect us from either ourselves or oth...
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, moreover, so, as to, at least, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 19.5258426966 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 12.4196629213 81% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 14.8657303371 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.3162921348 133% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 33.0505617978 103% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 58.6224719101 94% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 12.9106741573 54% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1624.0 2235.4752809 73% => OK
No of words: 367.0 442.535393258 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.42506811989 5.05705443957 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37689890912 4.55969084622 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5511625845 2.79657885939 91% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 215.323595506 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.49863760218 0.4932671777 101% => OK
syllable_count: 511.2 704.065955056 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59117977528 88% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 6.24550561798 128% => OK
Article: 9.0 4.99550561798 180% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.2370786517 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 23.0359550562 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 79.326042973 60.3974514979 131% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.5 118.986275619 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.9375 23.4991977007 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.125 5.21951772744 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 7.80617977528 13% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 10.2758426966 39% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 5.13820224719 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.146432410388 0.243740707755 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0624315725724 0.0831039109588 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0559248514365 0.0758088955206 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101613157247 0.150359130593 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0307746567516 0.0667264976115 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
automated_readability_index: 10.9 14.1392134831 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 48.8420337079 135% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 12.1743820225 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.71 12.1639044944 72% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.05 8.38706741573 84% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 100.480337079 54% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.8971910112 113% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 11.2143820225 96% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.