The human mind will always be superior to machines because machines are only tools of human minds.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
Machines have taken over certain percentage of the work force today. You can see machines in different sectors today like medical sector, agricultural sector, industrial sector and so on. Machines are built to help human in different daily activities, the human mind will always be superior to machine.
Admittedly, there are machines that make decisions by themselves (Autonomous Machines). These machines go ahead and make certain decisions that is believed to be the best and most appropriate. For instance, a self-driven car, this car makes use of the sensors around it to make decisions while driving to avoid hitting something or being hit and arriving at certain destination. This machine (self- driven car) was built to make life easier for human. However, we shouldn’t forget that this “autonomous” machines make decisions based on pre-registered information by the human mind.
However, as much as these machines are built to serve human, they cannot in any way be superior to the human mind. Machines cannot produce themselves, only the human can manufacture machine. For instance, a self-driven car cannot produce another self-driven car. This makes the human mind superior to the machine.
Moreover, the human mind is more understanding, has emotion, and can be sentimental, these are characteristics that makes the human mind rational and make the best decision. Machines do not fully understand what is going on around them. For instance, an autonomous car doesn’t know the reason why it’s avoiding a collision, but the human mind does. This makes the human mind superior.
In conclusion, the human mind will always be superior to the machines because of the ability of the human mind to reproduce also the human mind has better understand of the environment.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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... self-driven car, this car makes use of the sensors around it to make decisions while driving to avoi...
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...istered information by the human mind. However, as much as these machines are b...
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...s. This makes the human mind superior. In conclusion, the human mind will alway...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, moreover, so, while, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 19.5258426966 72% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 12.4196629213 64% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 14.8657303371 54% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.3162921348 35% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 33.0505617978 61% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 58.6224719101 51% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 7.0 12.9106741573 54% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1525.0 2235.4752809 68% => OK
No of words: 285.0 442.535393258 64% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.35087719298 5.05705443957 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 4.55969084622 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05987444849 2.79657885939 109% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 215.323595506 67% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.508771929825 0.4932671777 103% => OK
syllable_count: 482.4 704.065955056 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 6.24550561798 144% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.99550561798 120% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.2370786517 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 23.0359550562 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 45.0033447431 60.3974514979 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.7058823529 118.986275619 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7647058824 23.4991977007 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.23529411765 5.21951772744 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.298145307046 0.243740707755 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.120425073141 0.0831039109588 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0783009652969 0.0758088955206 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.205671324651 0.150359130593 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0605358760057 0.0667264976115 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 14.1392134831 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 48.8420337079 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 12.1743820225 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.45 12.1639044944 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.7 8.38706741573 92% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 100.480337079 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.8971910112 67% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 11.2143820225 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.7820224719 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.