The human mind will always be superior to machines because machines are only tools of human minds.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
In this technological advanced era machine & human effeciency is a inflamattory issue to get attention for resolving. Indeed, machine is way better than human for doing some complex & more critical tasks in less time. Yet, it is not necessarily true that machine can now be on a equal level to compare with human. As there are protean amount of factor which bound machines to follow human instruction in every tasks, there is no scope to consider machine more effecacious than human neurons.
Human thought process is the most unique matter of the world which makes human the best creature of this world. Machine are no exception from the other creatures of the world who bound to do the things what the humans wanted to do with them. The diversity of computer programming can be a major example of this. The Java, C programming , C++ programming, Python etc. have enable machines to do various works but all the works are sequenced by the humans. It is the human mind who develops all this programmes & organized that for using on their own prospective. This so called superflous programees & autonomus machines are nothing but a puppets of human. Despite they can solve convoluted problems like determining the trillions number of PI digits, they are doing that because of the humans who wanted to determine that.
On the other hand, machine do not have their own thinking capability. As a result of that they can not create creative things like humans. Machine can draw a art, compose a music, make a video game but the fact is the driver of doing all things are humans who are sitting on chairs & giving instructions to the machine. Machine may shape all the things with much accurate than humans but they can not create that alone. For example, in recent times the music industry are adapting computer based composition where all the instruments are playing by the computer programees like fruit studio or Adobe music. However, all the raw item that used on that softwares are pre recorded by the humans. Hence , it can not be considered autonomous.
Furthermore, machine data can be hacked while human mind can not be accessable by other humans. Though machine can contain a lot of storage than human neuron cells, there are no ensurity of that data are safe fully. Because of machine are nowadays storing data, it is easy to attack other privacy. For example, a few years ago America's Pentagon database was hacked by some hackers. Beside this, last year Bangladesh central bank has been robbed using a online hacking. Therefore, this machine may have been really cardinal for sotring huge amount of data but not for storing safe data.
As long as machines can not think like human or machine can grow creativity there is no sign to compare machines with human brains. Human brains are the father of the all the machines are born. Hence, it is imponderable that machine will triumph over human brains.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...anced era machine & human effeciency is a inflamattory issue to get attention for...
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...ssarily true that machine can now be on a equal level to compare with human. As t...
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...ompare with human. As there are protean amount of factor which bound machines to follo...
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...ons. Human thought process is the most unique matter of the world which makes human t...
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...example of this. The Java, C programming , C++ programming, Python etc. have enabl...
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...umans. It is the human mind who develops all this programmes & organized that for...
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...ve. This so called superflous programees & autonomus machines are nothing but a ...
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...erflous programees & autonomus machines are nothing but a puppets of human. Desp...
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...he other hand, machine do not have their own thinking capability. As a result of ...
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...instructions to the machine. Machine may shape all the things with much accurate ...
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...desh central bank has been robbed using a online hacking. Therefore, this machine...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, hence, however, may, really, so, therefore, while, for example, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 33.0 19.5258426966 169% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 12.4196629213 121% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 14.8657303371 47% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 17.0 11.3162921348 150% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 33.0505617978 88% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 58.6224719101 90% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 12.9106741573 31% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2429.0 2235.4752809 109% => OK
No of words: 498.0 442.535393258 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.87751004016 5.05705443957 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.72397222731 4.55969084622 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50328986555 2.79657885939 90% => OK
Unique words: 248.0 215.323595506 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.497991967871 0.4932671777 101% => OK
syllable_count: 774.9 704.065955056 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 6.24550561798 128% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 28.0 20.2370786517 138% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 23.0359550562 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.2831656217 60.3974514979 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.75 118.986275619 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7857142857 23.4991977007 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 5.21951772744 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 18.0 7.80617977528 231% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 5.13820224719 195% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.83258426966 186% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.255154873145 0.243740707755 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0824831140029 0.0831039109588 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0572930856913 0.0758088955206 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.177028295143 0.150359130593 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0592525313324 0.0667264976115 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 14.1392134831 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 48.8420337079 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 12.1743820225 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.73 12.1639044944 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.13 8.38706741573 97% => OK
difficult_words: 115.0 100.480337079 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 11.2143820225 78% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 54.17 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.25 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.