Every individual in a society has a responsibility to obey just laws and to disobey and
resist unjust laws.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with
the claim. In developing and supporting your position, be sure to address the most
compelling reasons and/or examples that could be used to challenge your position.
Every country has laws to protect the citizens right, maintain peace and security and other secondary purposes, but often times rule can be domaniting and hindering some aspect of life and feeedom of citizens. The prompt presents every citizen in a country should follow the just laws in the country whereas they have to be ruling out the unjust laws. This responses is a most to be done. However, the degree of disobeyance to the law should be fair such that doesn't hampers peace and posperity of the society as a whole.
The members of the society should always be loyal to their country and dedicate their acticities in the way that follows the prevalent laws and contribute the society and country being in congurus to the law. This speaks out the simple and honest facts that no citizen should be breaking laws and involve in activities of crime, theift, brivery, corruption and many other misleading works. Meanwhile, if no citizen involve in this kind of deeds, the country will ease ways to progress. Thus, citizen should limit their actions within the rules and regulations.
The is a question, 'What to do if the laws itself are corrupt and unjust' and the majority of the answer to this is revolt or protest againt these. In this part futher a bigger question arises, to what extend to protest, this should not hampering the peace and progess of the society. The resistance to unjust law should be gaurantee the correction with little or no hinderance to serenity existing in the present society. For instance, respect leader M. Ghandhi suceed the protest in peace and in the similar way no protest should involve destruction. The is a good chance to bring equality with peace and consistency.
Anyone enraged with the unequal and autocratic government policy can be easily attracte to initiating anticivilian groups and some kind of warllike action against the law. Nevertheless, in countries like Nepal the revolt against the government has taken voilent form but it only pushed the country years back in development and only secured some part of the law. This indicates the need of harmony and intelligent acts is better than voilent action.
All in all, the is a harmonious and progressive society which focuses following laws which are just and getting against the unjust laws. The thing to consider is the resistance against the law should be controlled and agreeable to all aspect of social progress.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 353, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: These
... have to be ruling out the unjust laws. This responses is a most to be done. However...
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Line 1, column 368, Rule ID: AGREEMENT_SENT_START[4]
Message: You should probably use: 'are'.
Suggestion: are
...ing out the unjust laws. This responses is a most to be done. However, the degree ...
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Line 1, column 461, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
...nce to the law should be fair such that doesnt hampers peace and posperity of the soci...
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Line 3, column 209, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...igger question arises, to what extend to protest, this should not hampering the p...
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Line 3, column 236, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'should' requires the base form of the verb: 'hamper'
Suggestion: hamper
...hat extend to protest, this should not hampering the peace and progess of the society. T...
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Line 3, column 388, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...with little or no hinderance to serenity existing in the present society. For ins...
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Line 4, column 357, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...opment and only secured some part of the law. This indicates the need of harmony ...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, nevertheless, second, so, thus, whereas, while, for instance, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 19.5258426966 97% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 12.4196629213 105% => OK
Conjunction : 28.0 14.8657303371 188% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.3162921348 44% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 33.0505617978 51% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 58.6224719101 92% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 12.9106741573 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2014.0 2235.4752809 90% => OK
No of words: 409.0 442.535393258 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92420537897 5.05705443957 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49708221141 4.55969084622 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55257192104 2.79657885939 91% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 215.323595506 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.491442542787 0.4932671777 100% => OK
syllable_count: 617.4 704.065955056 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 9.0 4.99550561798 180% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.2370786517 94% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 23.0359550562 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.6060616165 60.3974514979 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.0 118.986275619 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5263157895 23.4991977007 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.57894736842 5.21951772744 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 7.80617977528 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 5.13820224719 175% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.160453693036 0.243740707755 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0538592597788 0.0831039109588 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0583450924041 0.0758088955206 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.099436257619 0.150359130593 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0587279539306 0.0667264976115 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 14.1392134831 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 48.8420337079 120% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 12.1743820225 85% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 12.1639044944 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.5 8.38706741573 101% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 100.480337079 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.2143820225 93% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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