Government officials should rely on their own judgment rather than unquestioningly carry out the will of the people whom they serve.Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoni

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Government officials should rely on their own judgment rather than unquestioningly carry out the will of the people whom they serve.

Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.

Which criterion should be given when assessing government officials, their devotion to the will of the people whom they serve or their own resolution to act as their own decision? While someone argues that political leaders should serve as people's servants, others appreciate they have strong volition to follow their own heart, with conditional degradation of people's wills to secondary position. From my perspective of view, while to serve directly with people's wills could bring about short-term benefits, it would be myopic even dangerous to take it as long-term strategy. Furthermore, as society bellwethers and elites, government officials need to have courage to take practise with their ideas and plan to lead the society for the right future direction.

To start off, I have to concede that people's wills especially urgent requirements should carefully handled with and satisfied by political leaders. As people's wishes normally focus on their immediate requirement, such as education, electricity providing, normally such demands are obvious and easy to take actions for follow-up. Therefore, government officials could easily catch up with their pain point and collect necessary resources for solving with such conspicuous issues. In addition, the outgrowth of such problem-settling could help political leaders win the repute for the first time. Thus, to aim at the people's demands could definitely not only give political leaders direct credit, but also avoid their arduous searching for the society's requirements

Furthermore, granted the people's wills might focus on private interests and short-term benefit, it would be myopic and even dangerous to blindly follow without any wise choices. For example, when considering the issue of lack of electricity powers, normally people could only request to increase electricity supply. And with considering the safety relevant with their own, they would reject nuclear power as an option. However, from long run, the normal electricity providing could engender all of society cost and they are normally coming with several side effects, such as severe pollution. Thus, government officials, especially with the technical background of physics, would raise up their opinions why and how to leverage the nuclear power, but eliminate the negative impact as much as possible. Under such similar cases, to follow up with people's will instead impede with the wise suggestion from government officials.

Most important, as Roman's brilliant history could not be built in a day, our society leaders should balance the benefit both the long-term and the short run for the sake of guiding our world on the right way. Unlike what point out by the people's direct will, our political leaders with comprehensive knowledge understand why and how to make decision for the public end and take actions more efficiently. Therefore, their decisions could represent a more beneficial direction and avoid our society input to restrict with several limited direction. Take Roosevelt's New Deal as example, as one of great president in American, Roosevelt understand well about the disadvantage of economic driven purely by market, and also have comprehensive picture how to involve with national power to balance with such disadvantages. Thus, his new policy for economic recovery actually balance two ends, and help America come out of crisis.

In summary, considering that social development is actually a gradual and long run process and different interests from diverse groups could tangle together, it's better for our social leaders to plumb various factors and make wise decision after meticulous considerations. With their comprehensive knowledge and probity that we trust with, we should take side with them and encourage them to stick to the right policies for society improvement.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 100, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'should' requires the base form of the verb: 'handle'
Suggestion: handle
...ly urgent requirements should carefully handled with and satisfied by political leaders...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, second, so, therefore, thus, well, while, for example, in addition, in summary, such as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 19.5258426966 36% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 23.0 12.4196629213 185% => OK
Conjunction : 24.0 14.8657303371 161% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.3162921348 71% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 36.0 33.0505617978 109% => OK
Preposition: 85.0 58.6224719101 145% => OK
Nominalization: 23.0 12.9106741573 178% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3254.0 2235.4752809 146% => OK
No of words: 590.0 442.535393258 133% => OK
Chars per words: 5.51525423729 5.05705443957 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.92848004997 4.55969084622 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77736573279 2.79657885939 99% => OK
Unique words: 298.0 215.323595506 138% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.505084745763 0.4932671777 102% => OK
syllable_count: 995.4 704.065955056 141% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 6.24550561798 176% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.10617977528 225% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 5.0 1.77640449438 281% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 11.0 4.38483146067 251% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.2370786517 104% => OK
Sentence length: 28.0 23.0359550562 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 58.9925626582 60.3974514979 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 154.952380952 118.986275619 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.0952380952 23.4991977007 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.71428571429 5.21951772744 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 7.80617977528 13% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 10.2758426966 136% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.183457256042 0.243740707755 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0679016368565 0.0831039109588 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0584735231136 0.0758088955206 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11507995335 0.150359130593 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0632832957177 0.0667264976115 95% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.6 14.1392134831 132% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.6 48.8420337079 71% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 12.1743820225 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.03 12.1639044944 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.28 8.38706741573 111% => OK
difficult_words: 159.0 100.480337079 158% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.8971910112 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 11.2143820225 118% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.7820224719 119% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 83.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 6
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