Governments should invest as much in the arts as they do in the military.
A strong military is an essential need of a country. It allows the safety of the citizens of the country and if the citizens of the country are in peace, it is good for the welfare of the society. An art of a country is a depiction of the history of the country and also reflects the past of the country in showing how much importance to art was given in the earlier times.
To compare the the investments in military and arts, does not seem a cogent argument. While, strong military is an essential need of the country for the welfare of the citizens of the country,a representation of art is a mere scale to mark the aesthetics of the country. The investment of the government in one should be independent of the other. For example, in a country like Hong Kong, which is known for its modern development and sky scrapers, there is barely any major investments done in the arts sector of the country, and yet it is one of the places of highest tourist attraction and a strong military power.
Art is a representation of the culture and the heritage of a country and there should be an effort made to preserve the ethos of the country and investments should be made by the government to do so. But is there is a relation between the investments that a government should make in the art sector of country and the military? One would believe that the two are independent of each other and mutually exclusive. We can neither compare and nor generalize this supposition. If we take an example of a country like Greece, which has a very weak economy now, the emphasis on art given by the government completely makes sense. It is one of the major tourist attractions for its scenic beauty and vast landscapes. In this case the government should pay a major attention to the art of the country because it is helping in strengthening the economy of the country. Here maybe, the government is investing as much in art as it is investing in the military of the country.
Therefore, it cannot be a general statement which says that a government should invest as much in the arts as they do in the military because every country has its own needs and its own priorities in terms of the economy of the country and the welfare of the people. It cannot be denied that military plays a vital role in the safety of the country and there should be an independent focus on the investments of the government of a country in arts and in the military of the government.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'if', 'may', 'so', 'then', 'therefore', 'while', 'for example']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.237006237006 0.240241500013 99% => OK
Verbs: 0.118503118503 0.157235817809 75% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0706860706861 0.0880659088768 80% => OK
Adverbs: 0.031185031185 0.0497285424764 63% => OK
Pronouns: 0.031185031185 0.0444667217837 70% => OK
Prepositions: 0.162162162162 0.12292977631 132% => OK
Participles: 0.022869022869 0.0406280797675 56% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.73674702464 2.79330140395 98% => OK
Infinitives: 0.012474012474 0.030933414821 40% => Some infinitives wanted.
Particles: 0.0 0.0016655270985 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.185031185031 0.0997080785238 186% => Less determiners wanted.
Modal_auxiliary: 0.022869022869 0.0249443105267 92% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00831600831601 0.0148568991511 56% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2453.0 2732.02544248 90% => OK
No of words: 449.0 452.878318584 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.46325167038 6.0361032391 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.60321845022 4.58838876751 100% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.316258351893 0.366273622748 86% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.24276169265 0.280924506359 86% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.15144766147 0.200843997647 75% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.097995545657 0.132149295362 74% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73674702464 2.79330140395 98% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 219.290929204 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.360801781737 0.48968727796 74% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 39.5599869432 55.4138127331 71% => OK
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6194690265 82% => OK
Sentence length: 26.4117647059 23.380412469 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 66.3743707573 59.4972553346 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 144.294117647 141.124799967 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.4117647059 23.380412469 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.529411764706 0.674092028746 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.94800884956 81% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.21349557522 96% => OK
Readability: 50.6879339709 51.4728631049 98% => OK
Elegance: 2.33333333333 1.64882698954 142% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.413603015936 0.391690518653 106% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.219260640773 0.123202303941 178% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.129487589259 0.077325440228 167% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.664217341288 0.547984918172 121% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.223898150745 0.149214159877 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.225695681278 0.161403998019 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.140664396367 0.0892212321368 158% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.785188639271 0.385218514788 204% => Paragraphs have same ideas.
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0339518510754 0.0692045440612 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.354276025494 0.275328986314 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0916973759327 0.0653680567796 140% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.4325221239 96% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.30420353982 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88274336283 123% => OK
Positive topic words: 9.0 7.22455752212 125% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 3.66592920354 27% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 5.0 2.70907079646 185% => OK
Total topic words: 15.0 13.5995575221 110% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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