Governments should not fund any scientific research whose consequences are unclear.
Write a response in which you discuss your views on the policy and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider the possible consequences of implementing the policy and explain how these consequences shape your position.
For many scientific reasearch, especially those that are of potentially huge significance, funding is an integral issue. We have witnessed a lot of projects that are shut down because of the the lack of funding, and many have been possible only because of extravagent funding. Governments, which are a tremendous source of funding, play an important role to carry out many of these research, and this makes governmnet's decision to fund a research really important. I believe, since government plays such big role in determining the outcome of our scientific strivings, it should still fund a research even if the outcome of the research is not clear.
Science has always been about finding the unknown. A lot of time, we start a scientific research with a limited knowledge and end up with an expaned one. It is rare that we already know the outcome of the research before the research is done, and thus, there is barely a way to predict the significance of the research before the research is done. Hence, if we stick to a dogma that government should only fund the projects with definite result, we might not be able to to start even a single project. On the contrary, if scientific projects have the financial backing from the government, most, if not all the researches will produce results that will contibute to advancement of science and the nation.
Being able to start a research on a subject we have little knowledge is useful not just if the project succeds but also if it fails. Even if the project fails, we will have a better idea of when such research can fail and what to do and what not to do the next time we carry out the same research. Thus, failure of an indefinite experiemnt can serve to increase the definiteness of the research when done the next time. Therefore, it is important to get started with the research, and more often than not, it can only be done with the financial aid from the government.
I do concede to the fact that many researches on which the government invested a lot of money never produce the result equivalent to the money spent. This is the reaseon why people would urge the government to invest only on projects with certitude. However, scientific research is a field where the benefit can far outweigh the risk. Even if the government ocassionally loses mpney in some researches, the results of most researches have greatly contributed to the society and the economy. Hence, the fruit of taking the risk eventually falls into the basket of the government.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'hence', 'however', 'if', 'really', 'so', 'still', 'therefore', 'thus', 'on the contrary']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.204592901879 0.240241500013 85% => OK
Verbs: 0.148225469729 0.157235817809 94% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0855949895616 0.0880659088768 97% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0709812108559 0.0497285424764 143% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0334029227557 0.0444667217837 75% => OK
Prepositions: 0.110647181628 0.12292977631 90% => OK
Participles: 0.0292275574113 0.0406280797675 72% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.72024154989 2.79330140395 97% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0334029227557 0.030933414821 108% => OK
Particles: 0.00835073068894 0.0016655270985 501% => OK
Determiners: 0.141962421712 0.0997080785238 142% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0229645093946 0.0249443105267 92% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0250521920668 0.0148568991511 169% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2514.0 2732.02544248 92% => OK
No of words: 437.0 452.878318584 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.7528604119 6.0361032391 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.57214883401 4.58838876751 100% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.313501144165 0.366273622748 86% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.258581235698 0.280924506359 92% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.187643020595 0.200843997647 93% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.116704805492 0.132149295362 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72024154989 2.79330140395 97% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 219.290929204 93% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.466819221968 0.48968727796 95% => OK
Word variations: 51.5033344818 55.4138127331 93% => OK
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6194690265 87% => OK
Sentence length: 24.2777777778 23.380412469 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.7801997464 59.4972553346 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 139.666666667 141.124799967 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.2777777778 23.380412469 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.611111111111 0.674092028746 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.94800884956 81% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.21349557522 153% => OK
Readability: 50.1359013476 51.4728631049 97% => OK
Elegance: 1.36363636364 1.64882698954 83% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.21465094159 0.391690518653 55% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.147338537593 0.123202303941 120% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0714489893085 0.077325440228 92% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.595589914752 0.547984918172 109% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.136410995006 0.149214159877 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104649451813 0.161403998019 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0382166037814 0.0892212321368 43% => The sentences are too close to each other.
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.558086499108 0.385218514788 145% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0864665936504 0.0692045440612 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.170566585238 0.275328986314 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0118498754101 0.0653680567796 18% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.4325221239 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 5.30420353982 151% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88274336283 61% => OK
Positive topic words: 5.0 7.22455752212 69% => OK
Negative topic words: 8.0 3.66592920354 218% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 2.70907079646 74% => OK
Total topic words: 15.0 13.5995575221 110% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.