Governments should offer a free university education to any student who has beenadmitted to a university but who cannot afford the tuition.

Essay topics:

Governments should offer a free university education to any student who has been
admitted to a university but who cannot afford the tuition.

The crux of the the topic is that free university education should be provided to the students who can not afford tuition fees. I personally agree with statement for the following reasons and I am going to provide some examples to bolster my stance.
First of all, education is one of the most important basic human rights and a government should ensure that every child get a basic education and money does not hinders in the path of his education. Only proper education for the younger generation can ensure the development of a country. The countries who provided free education and have tuition free schools and university have tend to considered as developed country than countries which has lower literacy rate. For example, European countries like Germany and Finland provided free education and have tuition free universities, these countries are happier and developed than other countries who have higher tuition fees and tend to know more about their basic rights and political opinions.
A free university will be helpful to the students who came from lower income family background but an intelligent student and assuage the cumbersome student loans. A free university will also help students who have to work for their families and a huge tuition fee is burden to them, because they already have families to look after and a free education will give them a breathing space.
People might argue that a totally free education might be burden some to a institution and unfeasible. Government might provided scholarship and some waver to the students. But we already know the scholarship does not burgeon at the rate of the tuition fees grew. People also might argue that even wealthy students could attempt to chicanery to get into those free universities. But to counter that we can provided some stricture for the tuition free education.
At the end of the topic I would say that, despite of all the hindrance and problems a university without the tuition fee would be helpful or neglecting tuition fees for the students who are in need would all-together help the overall society and our community.

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Average: 5.8 (1 vote)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, look, so, for example, first of all

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 19.5258426966 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 12.4196629213 137% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 14.8657303371 141% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.3162921348 115% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 33.0505617978 64% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 58.6224719101 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 26.0 12.9106741573 201% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1766.0 2235.4752809 79% => OK
No of words: 352.0 442.535393258 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01704545455 5.05705443957 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33147354134 4.55969084622 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64572690725 2.79657885939 95% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 215.323595506 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.477272727273 0.4932671777 97% => OK
syllable_count: 557.1 704.065955056 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 6.24550561798 32% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.2370786517 69% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 23.0359550562 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.870776401 60.3974514979 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.142857143 118.986275619 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.1428571429 23.4991977007 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.78571428571 5.21951772744 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 7.80617977528 102% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.355093144025 0.243740707755 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.130874631383 0.0831039109588 157% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.115568821786 0.0758088955206 152% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.206461228036 0.150359130593 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0690759411552 0.0667264976115 104% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 14.1392134831 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 48.8420337079 94% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 12.1743820225 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 12.1639044944 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.84 8.38706741573 93% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 100.480337079 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.8971910112 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 11.2143820225 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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