Governments should offer a free university education to any student who has been admitted to a university but who cannot afford the tuition.
Outcome of expenditure is more significant more than the expenditure itself. Free education can assist in boosting the economy in numerous ways. Students with intellectual capability and confidence to clear rigorous admission process at least deserve a chance to pursue education.
It is government's obligation to provide funds to support education in their country. People who manage to get admitted to top colleges should not be deprived of getting an education due to pecuniary issues. Suppose A guy from small country manages to get an admission in one of the most elite university in US, but is not able to attend the college because of the financial conditions. One cannot imagine the trauma , that the student must be going through. Other financial options like loans only serve to induce more stress. Ultimately, due to stress the student is not able to score well in examinations, which creates self-doubt among students.
Students knowing their financial condition tend to do everything in their power in order to gain financial support, but sometimes things do not work-out. Does being born in a middle class family means you are not eligible for getting a fancy degree from top colleges?
Providing the young generation with an education is the only legit way to improve and sustain the economy. The students are shortlisted for admission in colleges because of their talent and idiosyncrasy. After Graduating these students would be contributing to the society with high pay jobs and paying back the government in the form of taxes. Sooner or later, Free education can generate massive amount of revenue which can be futher used in developement of country.
In rare cases students getting free education can become casual in dealing with their academics. This might pose question on providing free education . Nevertheless, major part of student population suffers if free university education is not provided. Government cannot neglect the need of million student just because a small fraction of these students are not able to complete their education.
Education should be given primacy as it is only with the help of education that we are able to achieve great things from getting anything we want at our doorstep to understanding the complex phenomenons of the universe. The whole economic cycle of a country will keep on replenishing if free univeristy education is provided.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, nevertheless, so, well, at least
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 19.5258426966 92% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 12.4196629213 105% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 14.8657303371 47% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.3162921348 44% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 33.0505617978 57% => OK
Preposition: 64.0 58.6224719101 109% => OK
Nominalization: 23.0 12.9106741573 178% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2016.0 2235.4752809 90% => OK
No of words: 386.0 442.535393258 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.22279792746 5.05705443957 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43248042346 4.55969084622 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83665840124 2.79657885939 101% => OK
Unique words: 213.0 215.323595506 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.551813471503 0.4932671777 112% => OK
syllable_count: 645.3 704.065955056 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.2370786517 104% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 23.0359550562 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.8239237089 60.3974514979 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.0 118.986275619 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.380952381 23.4991977007 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.95238095238 5.21951772744 37% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 21.0 7.80617977528 269% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 18.0 10.2758426966 175% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.233812595248 0.243740707755 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0673751659744 0.0831039109588 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0524102305001 0.0758088955206 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112877929448 0.150359130593 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0744947386756 0.0667264976115 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 14.1392134831 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 48.8420337079 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 12.1743820225 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.1639044944 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.5 8.38706741573 101% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 100.480337079 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.8971910112 88% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.2143820225 82% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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