Those who see their ideas through, regardless of doubts or criticism others may express, are the ones who tend to leave a lasting legacy.
Those who have challenged the criticism of their ideas are far more likely to leave their mark over the world. Critics have existed since the mankind has evolved, but some of the people try to make things better which automatically leads to legacy.
Those who challenged the criticism of their ideas, leave a lasting impression over the world. Wright brothers, Steve jobs, Nikola tesla and others, all were similar in the aspect that they didn’t get discouraged and kept working on their ideas, in spite of the continuous problems thrown, they were able to leave a strong motivation to act on their principles. The lifestyle that currently exists is because of the idiosyncrasy of these misfits. But, this does to necessarily mean that all the people having unique ideas leave lasting legacy,
People are often ridiculed for their idiosyncrasy, but to pursue the ideas, thinkers have to believe in their originality and authenticity. Nobody dared to think that people could fly, But the Wright brothers in spite of the regular skepticism and criticism were able to imagine and pursue their dream, which made the inter continent travel far more efficient. Ultimately, following their "crazy" idea led to something extra-ordinary and left their legacy.
It takes a lot of gumption to challenge the critics. This confidence comes with the originality and uniqueness of an idea -"People who are crazy enough to think they can change the world are the ones who do" -- it is important to realize the importance of an idea. The naysayers eventually become fans of the people when they prove something to the world, which ultimately leaves a lasting mark.
The Wright brothers, Steve job are just two names in the long list of people , who left a lasting legacy. These people tend to be exceptionally focused on their ideas. Michael Phelps worked much more than any top swimmers around the world. This allowed him to push the limit and raise the standard, which sooner or later led to the recognition. All he started was with an idea to be the best in the world and courage to pursue it.
In some cases the argument might be partially false. The case where you have an idea but you don’t pursue it whole heartedly, then it would to lead to disappointment, but otherwise the argument is vaguely plausible. Leaving a legacy is more than just an idea, It means to inspire the people to follow their dream and keep pushing to do better and improve upon their craft.
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 19.5258426966 82% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 12.4196629213 32% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 14.8657303371 114% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.3162921348 133% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 33.0505617978 115% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 58.6224719101 90% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 12.9106741573 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2070.0 2235.4752809 93% => OK
No of words: 419.0 442.535393258 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94033412888 5.05705443957 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.52432199235 4.55969084622 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6879483691 2.79657885939 96% => OK
Unique words: 219.0 215.323595506 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.522673031026 0.4932671777 106% => OK
syllable_count: 648.9 704.065955056 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 6.24550561798 144% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 1.77640449438 225% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.2370786517 94% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 23.0359550562 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.6495774699 60.3974514979 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.947368421 118.986275619 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0526315789 23.4991977007 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.36842105263 5.21951772744 45% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 16.0 7.80617977528 205% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 10.2758426966 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 5.13820224719 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.263718357729 0.243740707755 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0856693847379 0.0831039109588 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0897328277745 0.0758088955206 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152461957291 0.150359130593 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0566980546424 0.0667264976115 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 14.1392134831 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 48.8420337079 118% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 12.1743820225 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 12.1639044944 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.38 8.38706741573 100% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 100.480337079 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.8971910112 113% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 11.2143820225 96% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.83 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.25 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.