Governments should offer a free university education to any student who has been admitted to a university but who cannot afford the tuition.
Write a response in which you discuss your views on the policy and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider the possible consequences of implementing the policy and explain how these consequences shape your position.
Education is a very important for every man on this earth to develop his persona. Education helps a person to walk in a moral path which helps to build his or her individuality. People should be educated from very the childhood, which will in turn make them good citizens of the country. By considering all these above facts, we can totally agree to the author's statement that the government, must take care of its student citizens, encourage them to take up the education by providing affordable means of learning.
There are many children who are born with good talent, may it be in the field of science-thinking ability, maths and many other fields. But they may be pecuniary and may not afford for good tutions in universities to enshrine in their respective fields. The government must help these student citizens get good education in their field of intrest so that they can excel in their filed of interest. The government must pass some ammendments to provide free education to the students those who cannot afford for the tution fees, which will help the students to get good education.
Although this is a very good conviction, proper scrutinization has to made before offering the free tution to those indigent students. A verification has to be made checking what is the financial status of a student and then allow the student to enroll in the free tutions. There may be likely that a student evinces false reports and may get admitted to the free tutions. This should not happen. Only by proper scrutinizations, the students must be allowed to get free tutions.
Thus in total, it is the government responsibility to offer free tutions to the students who cannot afford for the tutions and before offering the free tutions, it is necessary to make double sure the financial background of the student. By providing equal education to all the students, they can shine in the future and become a good of a mankind
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 355, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'authors'' or 'author's'?
Suggestion: authors'; author's
...bove facts, we can totally agree to the authors statement that the government, must tak...
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Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
...must be allowed to get free tutions. Thus in total, it is the government responsi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, so, then, thus, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 19.5258426966 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 12.4196629213 145% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 14.8657303371 54% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.3162921348 80% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 33.0505617978 79% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 58.6224719101 85% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 12.9106741573 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1603.0 2235.4752809 72% => OK
No of words: 331.0 442.535393258 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.84290030211 5.05705443957 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26537283232 4.55969084622 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77865481683 2.79657885939 99% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 215.323595506 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.474320241692 0.4932671777 96% => OK
syllable_count: 497.7 704.065955056 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.2370786517 74% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 23.0359550562 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.5784367903 60.3974514979 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.866666667 118.986275619 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0666666667 23.4991977007 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.33333333333 5.21951772744 45% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 10.2758426966 136% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.13820224719 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.230106396294 0.243740707755 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.080095100055 0.0831039109588 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.060936657994 0.0758088955206 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149543415215 0.150359130593 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0437319638313 0.0667264976115 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 14.1392134831 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 48.8420337079 118% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 12.1743820225 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 12.1639044944 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.92 8.38706741573 94% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 100.480337079 67% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.8971910112 97% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 11.2143820225 96% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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