Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
At universities and colleges, sports and social activities are just as important as classes and libraries and should receive equal financial support.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
The sports and social activities are tantamount of importance as that of classes and libraries. Attending classes and reading journals and other stuff in libraries helps a student to gather his or her knowledge, but the sports and social activities also helps the student to learn how he or she can be gregarious. It helps the student meet new people, develops an etiquette to behave with others. The sports on the other hand, will help the student to have to increase his focusing ability.
When someone asks me the question on funding on the sports and social activities, I prefer to say "yes". This is because as I said in the previous paragraph, the social activities helps the person develop a proper decorum and the sports activities helps the person to have focus and it also helps to keep the body in a good condition.
We all know that many people are passionate about in many different fields. Like some may in sports, some may in Math or some may in physics. As part of curriculum, all students will be able to get the taste of all subjects, but the sports is the one activity, that many colleges ignore, concentrating more on the curriculum. If separate care is taken for sports, by funding and encouraging the students who do have interests in sports filed, will help the student to achieve his desire.
The sports as said, will help to improve our focusing ability and helps to keep our body healthy. We all know that "Sound body leads to a sound mind". Such a healthy mind can be developed only be sports which I recommend to be supported financially.
One more activity that needs to financially supported is social activities. With good social engagement, a person learns proper decorum and would try to behave with proper etiquette at germane situations. He or she can meet different kinds of people, understand many things by talking with them and helps in developing healthy atmosphere among a group. Such a healthy social activity should definitely be encouraged by funding. It can be funded for purposes like arranging a team meeting across the departments in a college or anything.
Therefore, funding for both social activities and for sports should be given the same importance as that of the classes and libraries by funding.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 54, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
...hat many people are passionate about in many different fields. Like some may in sports, some m...
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Line 7, column 222, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'recommend being'.
Suggestion: recommend being
...can be developed only be sports which I recommend to be supported financially. One more act...
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Line 11, column 120, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e same importance as that of the classes and libraries by funding.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so, therefore, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 9.8082437276 143% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 13.8261648746 152% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 43.0788530466 63% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 52.1666666667 96% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1899.0 1977.66487455 96% => OK
No of words: 388.0 407.700716846 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.89432989691 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43821085614 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76456303002 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 212.727598566 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.461340206186 0.524837075471 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 587.7 618.680645161 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.614715691 48.9658058833 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.9473684211 100.406767564 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4210526316 20.6045352989 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.73684210526 5.45110844103 50% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.53405017921 132% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.173752647137 0.236089414692 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.065654450925 0.076458572812 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0657704812542 0.0737576698707 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104029405272 0.150856017488 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0538579318417 0.0645574589148 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 11.7677419355 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 10.9000537634 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.48 8.01818996416 93% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 86.8835125448 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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