People attend college or university for many different reasons (for example,
new experiences, career preparation, increased knowledge). Why do you think
people attend college or university? Use specific reasons and examples to support
your answer.
Education plays a vital role in each person's life. I believe to gain such a knowledge, college or the university is the best place you can ever see on this earth. I feel that people go to college or university to increase their knowledge, in their area of interest. To become master in their field of interest which ultimately make them a don of that field. There are three reasons, that I believe why people go to college or university to increase their knowledge which I will be explaining in the next paragraphs of the essay.
Going to college or university, on the first hand gives us the clarity on what field we are having the interest. For example, we will have variety of courses in our high schools giving a general idea on all subjects which helps us to understand the logistics of those subjects. Here, we may not have complete clarity on what field we are interested in, but, gives a hint of what subject, we often study more, intend to think a lot, surf more about in internet. This is the point where we can understand in which filed we have the interest and we can develop deep interest to learn more.
After high school, once we come to college, we have the option to choose, whichever subject we are interested in. Once we choose that kind of subject, we will develop more interest in that field, without our knowledge, and start digging deep in that subject to know more. For example, I am interested in computers, programming and for this reason, I choose computer science in my college. Day by day, I started programming using different languages like C, C++ and other. I developed interest in this subject and decided to do my masters in computer science in one of the best universities.
Nowadays, due to the advancement in technology, the universities, are providing best opportunities to all students to put out their ideas and innovations in the form of experiments. I believe, when we start applying anything that we have read makes us understand more on the subject and enhances our knowledge. It strengthens our knowledge and that's how people innovate new things each day. Hence, I believe that people attend universities or college to increase knowledge, rather just to have new experiences, or career preparations.
Thus, in total, attending college or universities in mainly to increase our knowledge and become don of the subjects.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 38, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'persons'' or 'person's'?
Suggestion: persons'; person's
Education plays a vital role in each persons life. I believe to gain such a knowledg...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...his is the point where we can understand in which filed we have the interest and ...
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Line 7, column 71, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[4]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'providing the best'.
Suggestion: providing the best
...nt in technology, the universities, are providing best opportunities to all students to put ou...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: that's
...ledge. It strengthens our knowledge and thats how people innovate new things each day...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, hence, if, may, so, then, thus, for example, i feel, kind of, of course
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 15.1003584229 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 56.0 43.0788530466 130% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 63.0 52.1666666667 121% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1966.0 1977.66487455 99% => OK
No of words: 410.0 407.700716846 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.79512195122 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49982852243 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78655734629 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 212.727598566 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.485365853659 0.524837075471 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 626.4 618.680645161 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 16.0 9.59856630824 167% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.9508558818 48.9658058833 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.473684211 100.406767564 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5789473684 20.6045352989 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.36842105263 5.45110844103 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 18.0 11.8709677419 152% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.191331802369 0.236089414692 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0746625064087 0.076458572812 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.090187589083 0.0737576698707 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135419766113 0.150856017488 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0725996207612 0.0645574589148 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 11.7677419355 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 58.1214874552 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.56 10.9000537634 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.45 8.01818996416 93% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 86.8835125448 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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