Governments should offer a free university education to any student who has been admitted to a university but who cannot afford the tuition.
Write a response in which you discuss your views on the policy and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider the possible consequences of implementing the policy and explain how these consequences shape your position.
Education is the backbone of a nation. It trains youth with educated ideas which can frame a nations as a better country in coming days. I agree to the claim that government should provide free university for students who cannot afford tuition. This is a n effective reform is undertaken in a well planed manner. Free university education has the power to bring development in every field, right from countries economy to a nation's political. Ultimately making this world , a better place to live in.
To begin with, our world is surrounded by a number of developing countries, whis has yet to overcom with may issues, may that be their population exlposion or their economy. Such countries should concentrate about their educational system . Because, its today's youth that can led a nation to a better future.To illustrate this contend let us take an instance of nation india. It is a developing country ,dealing with numerous issue. Many individual can not afford higher education because of their financial status. Ins such circumstance if they are provided with a free university, they can bring a change . No doubt, literacy rate of india can improve, increasing the nation's status in terms of economy, politics etc. Hence, it is important to provide education to students who fail to afford the same.
However , it is highly important for government to utilize such claim in an effective manner to achieve good result. a nation is made up of high as well as low class . Hence, providing free universial education even to those who can afford it, is not abstract. for instance, country like africa. Many individual are educated . that implies they are capable of affording education for themselves. In such cases governmemt to identify the needy students and help those. Government money can be utilized in a proper and planned way for the betterment of the nation in other fields,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, however, if, may, well, for instance, no doubt, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 19.5258426966 72% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 12.4196629213 97% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 14.8657303371 27% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.3162921348 71% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 33.0505617978 79% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 58.6224719101 73% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 12.9106741573 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1573.0 2235.4752809 70% => OK
No of words: 314.0 442.535393258 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.00955414013 5.05705443957 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20951839842 4.55969084622 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75634034716 2.79657885939 99% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 215.323595506 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.566878980892 0.4932671777 115% => OK
syllable_count: 506.7 704.065955056 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 6.24550561798 160% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.2370786517 109% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 23.0359550562 61% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.8844610082 60.3974514979 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 71.5 118.986275619 60% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.2727272727 23.4991977007 61% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.63636363636 5.21951772744 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.97078651685 60% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 21.0 7.80617977528 269% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 10.2758426966 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.83258426966 145% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.181968319559 0.243740707755 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0612215732214 0.0831039109588 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0827021762037 0.0758088955206 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143488155842 0.150359130593 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0564657923211 0.0667264976115 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 14.1392134831 66% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 48.8420337079 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 12.1743820225 72% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.19 12.1639044944 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.4 8.38706741573 100% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 100.480337079 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.8971910112 63% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 11.2143820225 68% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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