Teachers' salaries should be based on their students' academic performance.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and supporting your position, be sure to address the most compelling reasons and/or examples that could be used to challenge your position.
This has led us to a highly controversial topic if teacher'a salary should be based on student's academic results.
Indisputably, Teachers are the knowledge provider for students, if a student fail to perform well in academic it might be the teacher's fault. Neavertheless, this is not always correct.Present world of internet, social medie act as the knowledge provider of many students, Hence, blaming teacher's for an student's ill preformance is unfair. Therefore, i disagree with the opinion that Teacher's salary should be based on student's academic performance.
First of all,for a student, Performing better in academic completely depends on him/her self. It dependson if an individual takes his education seriously and make effort to perform better. I also depend on the interest of a student. Few individual are more inclined towards sports activities and dont like to study. Such student may not perform well in their examination. Academic results of a child also depends on its mental strength. Some individual are born with great mental strength whereas others need special attentions to make them understand . All the above proves that academic results of a student depents upon their interest , hardwork and mental strength and not on a teacher.
Admittedly, many proponent may argue that as teacher's are the first knowledge provider for a student, failure in academics also must be the result of a teacher's negligence. However this in not always the case. Parents also play a great role in a student's acadermics. Moreover in this world of internet many youngsters learn a lot from computer , through online studies , through video lestions etc. Hence, even if with a teacher's negligence a student can gain enormous knowledge through internet.
Finally, academic results implies overal perfprmance of the class.A class must be made up of different type of students. Some may be very good in understandings subject matter with good mental ability whereas, others may need special attention. In such an unequal distributed of student's quality, teachers effort canot be evaluated properly. Hence a teachers salary should not be depandent up on a student academic performance.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, hence, however, if, may, moreover, so, therefore, well, whereas, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 19.5258426966 72% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 12.4196629213 105% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 14.8657303371 27% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 11.3162921348 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 33.0505617978 57% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 58.6224719101 78% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 12.9106741573 70% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1852.0 2235.4752809 83% => OK
No of words: 344.0 442.535393258 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.38372093023 5.05705443957 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30665032142 4.55969084622 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93351821743 2.79657885939 105% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 215.323595506 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.529069767442 0.4932671777 107% => OK
syllable_count: 567.9 704.065955056 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.2370786517 104% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 23.0359550562 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.6235688812 60.3974514979 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.1904761905 118.986275619 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.380952381 23.4991977007 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.95238095238 5.21951772744 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 25.0 7.80617977528 320% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 5.13820224719 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.228389951026 0.243740707755 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0822745393487 0.0831039109588 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0897560647053 0.0758088955206 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152109713814 0.150359130593 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0533973878351 0.0667264976115 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 14.1392134831 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 48.8420337079 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 12.1743820225 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.63 12.1639044944 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.84 8.38706741573 105% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 100.480337079 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.8971910112 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 11.2143820225 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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