Nations should pass laws to preserve any remaining wilderness areas in their natural state, even if these areas could be developed for economic gain.
Write a response in which you discuss your views on the policy and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider the possible consequences of implementing the policy and explain how these consequences shape your position.
The past world was the home of nature. it was gifted with plenty of flora and fauna, however human being began to hunt the nature for their own selfish mean , in turn devastating the environment. Present world is the home of industrialization and globalization where the the wildness and beauty of nature is degrading. Keeping the present era under consideration i strongly believed that the wildness and the originality of nature should be preserved .No doubt that economical gain plays a vital role in a countrie's economy but at the cost of nature is not worth a gain.
To begin with, "today's" world is the victim of globalization and industrialization. Industrialization brings economy and gives a country world wide recognition. Hence, not only industrialist but the governing parties are also engaged in these activities, neglecting its harmful result. Many dense forest , which was once the home of beautiful wildlife is now barren land .In addition , global warming is also increasing day by day. To illustrate the harmful effect we can take the Arctic glacier as an instance whichis melting at a constant rate. The day in not far when the glacier water will raise the water level of sea. hence , we need to take major to protect our environment.
In a contrary to the above statement many proponeny may claim that nature is the gift of god to human being. Every individual should take primitive steps to ensure its preservation. This can be true only if every individual in this earth understand the value of nature. At the other hand , if the governing body come forward and contribute laws to protect nature its affect shall be fruitful and highliting. To illustrate this , "swatch bharat abhyan" in india , started by prime minister Narandra modi is the best example of government establishing law to protect wildness area.
Last but not the least , a country can still generate revenue from tourism by using wildness area at its natural state. Because of the wide spread awarness of nature's preservation, people show their interest in scenic beauty. Hence, there in no doubt that area's can be used in tourism purpose. The arches national park of Utah is a great example of this .
In conclusion ,i would like to state that it is the responsibility of government to preserve nature . Not only government but each individual should take small step to bring a change.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, may, so, still, in addition, in conclusion, no doubt, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 19.5258426966 102% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 12.4196629213 97% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 14.8657303371 81% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.3162921348 71% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 33.0505617978 70% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 58.6224719101 97% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 12.9106741573 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2003.0 2235.4752809 90% => OK
No of words: 398.0 442.535393258 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03266331658 5.05705443957 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46653527281 4.55969084622 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01124761792 2.79657885939 108% => OK
Unique words: 226.0 215.323595506 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.56783919598 0.4932671777 115% => OK
syllable_count: 636.3 704.065955056 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.38483146067 228% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.2370786517 109% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 23.0359550562 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 46.4212876859 60.3974514979 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.0454545455 118.986275619 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0909090909 23.4991977007 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.45454545455 5.21951772744 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 32.0 7.80617977528 410% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 10.2758426966 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.83258426966 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.160690088426 0.243740707755 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.040966104156 0.0831039109588 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.041388866254 0.0758088955206 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0916308304033 0.150359130593 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0430252866884 0.0667264976115 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 14.1392134831 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 48.8420337079 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 12.1743820225 85% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 12.1639044944 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.42 8.38706741573 100% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 100.480337079 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.8971910112 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.2143820225 82% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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