Governments should offer a free university education to any student who has been admitted to a university but who cannot afford the tuition.
Write a response in which you discuss your views on the policy and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider the possible consequences of implementing the policy and explain how these consequences shape your position.
Since the establishment of university education, it has never been designed as an enterprise designed from everyone. University education provides little benefit to skills people need for many careers in the society, only when people desire to pursue a job that requires that level of education, should people attend universities. Therefore, I believe the government should not offer scholarships to everyone who gets admitted to universities.
Where will the government acquire the money to fund students who cannot afford university tuitions? The answer is obvious, from the taxes collected from the citizens. The government should carefully weigh the costs and the benefits entailed. Surly university education can increase the general welfare and devleopment of the country, but so can building more roads or community housing. Offering free university education to any student who is admitted may not exactly be the most cost effective option, especially with univeristy admission becoming so lax that anyone can score an admission as long as they pay the fees.
While some people may argue that university education is a necessity offering students chances to further their knowledge, cooperation skills and leadership skills et cetera, I dare say that the majority of these skills can be acquired through education before university. In New Zealand, the percentage of the population that participated in university education is just over 30%; had university been that important, we would expect to see New Zealand in a disasterous state. However, New Zealand boasts a strong economy, and is the only developed country rooted from a fully agricultural background. New Zealand leads the world in most of the sectors such as GDP, Education Index and Happiness Rating, out performing many countries with 70% of the population with a bachelor degree of above.
Nevertheless, in countries such as Taiwan or Japan, where nearly all of the young people are enrolled or have acquired university degrees, the government should consider providing scholarships to students who cannot afford the tuition. In these highly competitive countries, many people complete Masters and even PhD degrees before they start working. Job applications from people without bachelor degrees are literally trashed without giving any futher inspection. With the firms placing such great emphasis on university degrees, only by providing less fortunate people with scholarships to attend universities can the government bridge the socio-economical gaps between the rich and the poor.
In conclusion, university education should only be offered in countries where bachelor degrees are required even for the most rudimentary jobs. This level of education is not essential for the majority of the population in many countries. If the government insists providing everyone who gets admitted with a scholarship, it will ultimately backfire upon the society.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, may, nevertheless, so, therefore, while, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 19.5258426966 72% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 12.4196629213 145% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 14.8657303371 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.3162921348 141% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 33.0505617978 54% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 58.6224719101 94% => OK
Nominalization: 25.0 12.9106741573 194% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2495.0 2235.4752809 112% => OK
No of words: 447.0 442.535393258 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.58165548098 5.05705443957 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.59808378696 4.55969084622 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96247385136 2.79657885939 106% => OK
Unique words: 233.0 215.323595506 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.521252796421 0.4932671777 106% => OK
syllable_count: 791.1 704.065955056 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.59117977528 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.38483146067 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.2370786517 94% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 23.0359550562 100% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.13746948 60.3974514979 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.315789474 118.986275619 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5263157895 23.4991977007 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.26315789474 5.21951772744 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 7.80617977528 13% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.2758426966 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.83258426966 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.266025502101 0.243740707755 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0882135501389 0.0831039109588 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0715411970152 0.0758088955206 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.164911914731 0.150359130593 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0475983752428 0.0667264976115 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.6 14.1392134831 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 31.21 48.8420337079 64% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 12.1743820225 120% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.38 12.1639044944 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.73 8.38706741573 104% => OK
difficult_words: 112.0 100.480337079 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.8971910112 76% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 11.2143820225 100% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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