Governments should offer a free university education to any student who has been admitted to a university but who cannot afford the tuition.
Basic education is important for everyone and the talented achieve higher education. The government should support to talent which will be future of country. I totally agree with the statement that government should offer a free university education to any student who has been admitted to a university but who cannot afford the tuition. I am supporting the statement on basis of following points.
Firstly, there are differences between economic conditions of the people lived in the same country. The people belongs to lower economic group also have some talent which vanquished due to lack of finances. The universities charged according to the expenditures and their profit which will be too much. The students of low economic strata started work to earn money but it is not sufficient to afford university fees. The government have support such hard working students to fulfill their dreams. After all the students are good investment of the government because they will sever to the nation with their knowledge.
Secondly, in the age of choosing correct career path students eliminate the courses or the universities having high tuition. One of the student I had seen in my school where I am working as a counselor, he was excellent in science and got first prize in science exhibition at regional level. But he did not have money to get admission in IIT College. So he left his dream and decided to join any job after 12th and with job take admission in any course which is affordable. In India there is reservation system on the basis of caste and he belong to highest caste though was poor so he didn’t get any help from government. Now in India the government started a scheme Medhavi Chatra which gives benefit to talented students.
Thirdly, the parents worked hard and take loans for their children education which is very stressful. The parents have lots of dreams for their children and they do hard to fulfill them. In India parents scarifies with their life for their children. I had seen parents join part time job with regular full time job to earn more money to pay university fees of their children. If the government helps the students then the benefit will be return to country itself. As I had previously mentioned in India the scheme had launched with which so many students are taking benefits and study in different universities. However, the government has to work warily while providing monetary help to students because people show fake ID’s to get money illegally but it is big help for talented students.
Finally, On the basis of aforementioned points it is clear that the government should offer free university education to students who are talented and cannot afford the tuitions.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...t sufficient to afford university fees. The government have support such hard worki...
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Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to correct'
Suggestion: to correct
...edge. Secondly, in the age of choosing correct career path students eliminate the cour...
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Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'belongs'.
Suggestion: belongs
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Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'to the highest'.
Suggestion: to the highest
...tem on the basis of caste and he belong to highest caste though was poor so he didn't...
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Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
...their children. I had seen parents join part time job with regular full time job to earn ...
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Message: This word is normally spelled as one.
Suggestion: fulltime
...parents join part time job with regular full time job to earn more money to pay universit...
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Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... pay university fees of their children. If the government helps the students then ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, then, third, thirdly, while, after all, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 19.5258426966 87% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 12.4196629213 72% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 14.8657303371 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.3162921348 115% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 33.0505617978 91% => OK
Preposition: 60.0 58.6224719101 102% => OK
Nominalization: 23.0 12.9106741573 178% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2275.0 2235.4752809 102% => OK
No of words: 458.0 442.535393258 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.9672489083 5.05705443957 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.62611441266 4.55969084622 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66615344136 2.79657885939 95% => OK
Unique words: 219.0 215.323595506 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.478165938865 0.4932671777 97% => OK
syllable_count: 705.6 704.065955056 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.99550561798 160% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.2370786517 119% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 23.0359550562 82% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.732588884 60.3974514979 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.7916666667 118.986275619 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0833333333 23.4991977007 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.83333333333 5.21951772744 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 7.80617977528 102% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 10.2758426966 156% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.335425505745 0.243740707755 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0977289122561 0.0831039109588 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.185424489995 0.0758088955206 245% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.268275918756 0.150359130593 178% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.208436178859 0.0667264976115 312% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 14.1392134831 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 48.8420337079 124% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 12.1743820225 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 12.1639044944 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.72 8.38706741573 92% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 100.480337079 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.8971910112 63% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.2143820225 86% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.7820224719 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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