Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Television has destroyed communication among friends and family. Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.
I totally agree with the statement that television has destroyed communication among friends and family. Television programs engage us for a long time and we have not been released. There are several reasons and examples which support my position in the essay.
First, in olden days family members sat together and talked about their whole day whereas today everyone watches television and ignores each other. Everyone chooses television to feel relaxed and happy and repressed emotional burden due to daily work load. The better way is to talk about the whole day with family members and resolve all issues. For example, when I was young we did not have television and my family would take dinner together and talk about the whole day but now we all prefer watching television shows while dinner. Due to this shift I have observed lacking in communication between my family members.
Second, today people talk about television shows first among friends. It is easy to talk about something other than emotions or feelings. People try to find friends who have common choices of television shows so that they can spend time watching or talking about those shows. For instance, on weekends my friends gather for parties and most of the time we all talk about movies or we watch movies and no one cares about healthy communication about everyone.
Third, nowadays the psychologists found so many behavioral problems in children. After a research they found communication gap between family members is one of the major reasons behind behavioral disturbances. There are so many case studies indicating adolescents did crime due to inattention of parents or friends. For example, my nieces started self harm behaviors because no one talked with her and everyone spent most of their time watching television.
Finally, aforementioned reasons and examples are few from plenty present around us. Communication is the most important key to making a healthy relationship and it gets destroyed by television and other such electronic devices.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 17, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'days'' or 'day's'?
Suggestion: days'; day's
...ition in the essay. First, in olden days family members sat together and talked ...
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Line 7, column 82, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “After” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...o many behavioral problems in children. After a research they found communication gap...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, if, second, so, third, whereas, while, as to, for example, for instance, talking about
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 9.8082437276 20% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 13.8261648746 152% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 43.0788530466 60% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 52.1666666667 79% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1713.0 1977.66487455 87% => OK
No of words: 329.0 407.700716846 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20668693009 4.8611393121 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25891501996 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70077167573 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 212.727598566 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.553191489362 0.524837075471 105% => OK
syllable_count: 535.5 618.680645161 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.59856630824 31% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.4862565027 48.9658058833 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.1666666667 100.406767564 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2777777778 20.6045352989 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.94444444444 5.45110844103 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.195144837881 0.236089414692 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0744555641198 0.076458572812 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0892238369913 0.0737576698707 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13557882464 0.150856017488 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0978716894113 0.0645574589148 152% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 11.7677419355 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 58.1214874552 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 10.9000537634 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.98 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 86.8835125448 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.