The offered prompt suggests that ruling governments should typically exercise some kind of control over scientific research and advancements in their particular countries. The reasons for my ambivalence regarding the topic are listed below. I only partially agree with the subject at hand.
First of all, a new scientific discovery can prove to be the greatest help or the worst weapon for humanity. Take the construction of the most destructive atomic weapons ever known as an example. The discovery of atomic energy, which has the potential to be the world's most abundant source of energy This is one compelling argument in favour of governments having some sort of development regulations.While it is necessary for us to delve deeper into science, we also need to make sure that these depths don't lead us to our own destruction.
The second argument is that scientific study frequently deviates from morals or becomes a risky experiment. The most relevant example to demonstrate this is the prohibition on further advancements in human cloning. Supporters of human cloning argue that they are merely the fruits of scientific experimentation, but they neglect to mention that they still contain some sort of life.Governments all across the world decided to halt further research on "generating" human clones after taking into account the fact that they would have lives, but those lives would be brief due to their genetic problems. The governments could guarantee that no life or property is harmed in the name of science by controlling a lot of such research.
Even after the two aforementioned, extremely compelling arguments, I still "mostly agree" with the statement I made at the beginning of the essay that government regulation of research should be aimed at advancing rather than stifling humankind. A government is nothing more than an organisation, and regrettably, they do not always prioritise serving the interests of humanity. In order to increase their authority beyond boundaries, several nations pay special attention to the development of armaments.
The second reason for just partially adhering to regulations is easily defended by the European Renaissance. The influence of orthodox society and excessive royal meddling during those times rendered scientific liberation all but impossible.
Scientific research and development is a topic that has its own shades of grey and is not just a basic black and white issue. Governments should be able to control it while still allowing for necessary exploration freedom. It all comes down to how the development is going to be used and in what areas it should be managed in the end.
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 402, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: While
...ng some sort of development regulations.While it is necessary for us to delve deeper ...
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Line 3, column 505, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...lso need to make sure that these depths dont lead us to our own destruction. The ...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Governments
...at they still contain some sort of life.Governments all across the world decided to halt fu...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, regarding, second, so, still, while, kind of, sort of, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 19.5258426966 97% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 12.4196629213 72% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 14.8657303371 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.3162921348 88% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 33.0505617978 106% => OK
Preposition: 61.0 58.6224719101 104% => OK
Nominalization: 25.0 12.9106741573 194% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2263.0 2235.4752809 101% => OK
No of words: 424.0 442.535393258 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.33726415094 5.05705443957 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.53775939005 4.55969084622 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.17064563228 2.79657885939 113% => OK
Unique words: 246.0 215.323595506 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.580188679245 0.4932671777 118% => OK
syllable_count: 701.1 704.065955056 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 10.0 4.99550561798 200% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.2370786517 89% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 23.0359550562 100% => OK
Sentence length SD: 89.6812083761 60.3974514979 148% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.722222222 118.986275619 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5555555556 23.4991977007 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.94444444444 5.21951772744 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 5.13820224719 117% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.17540160982 0.243740707755 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0519593792071 0.0831039109588 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.025417636433 0.0758088955206 34% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0906205997263 0.150359130593 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0310147995814 0.0667264976115 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 14.1392134831 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 48.8420337079 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 12.1743820225 110% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.99 12.1639044944 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.21 8.38706741573 110% => OK
difficult_words: 119.0 100.480337079 118% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.8971910112 71% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 11.2143820225 100% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 75.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.5 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 402, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: While
...ng some sort of development regulations.While it is necessary for us to delve deeper ...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 505, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...lso need to make sure that these depths dont lead us to our own destruction. The ...
^^^^
Line 5, column 383, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Governments
...at they still contain some sort of life.Governments all across the world decided to halt fu...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, regarding, second, so, still, while, kind of, sort of, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 19.5258426966 97% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 12.4196629213 72% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 14.8657303371 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.3162921348 88% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 33.0505617978 106% => OK
Preposition: 61.0 58.6224719101 104% => OK
Nominalization: 25.0 12.9106741573 194% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2263.0 2235.4752809 101% => OK
No of words: 424.0 442.535393258 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.33726415094 5.05705443957 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.53775939005 4.55969084622 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.17064563228 2.79657885939 113% => OK
Unique words: 246.0 215.323595506 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.580188679245 0.4932671777 118% => OK
syllable_count: 701.1 704.065955056 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 10.0 4.99550561798 200% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.2370786517 89% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 23.0359550562 100% => OK
Sentence length SD: 89.6812083761 60.3974514979 148% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.722222222 118.986275619 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5555555556 23.4991977007 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.94444444444 5.21951772744 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 5.13820224719 117% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.17540160982 0.243740707755 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0519593792071 0.0831039109588 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.025417636433 0.0758088955206 34% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0906205997263 0.150359130593 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0310147995814 0.0667264976115 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 14.1392134831 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 48.8420337079 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 12.1743820225 110% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.99 12.1639044944 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.21 8.38706741573 110% => OK
difficult_words: 119.0 100.480337079 118% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.8971910112 71% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 11.2143820225 100% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 75.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.5 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.