If two applicants for a job are otherwise equally qualified, the job should go to the applicant with more experience.

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If two applicants for a job are otherwise equally qualified, the job should go to the applicant with more experience.

Today’s world is full of competition in the job field and candidates fighting with other candidates with similar qualification in the job market and the more knowledgeable candidate will have been qualified for the job. I agree with the author claim because knowledge is not limited only in paper or pen, it depends on how people apply in the practical field.
Firstly, qualification is important for a job because it is the foundation of candidate knowledge but without experience, knowledge is just a piece of paper. Moreover, the experience is essential for piratical field and implication of the knowledge in the real world. For example, engineer, doctor, fire-fighter jobs need huge experience. In the engineering field if engineers have little experience in work like in construction work; it could be dangerous because with little lacking thousands of worker or general people can die. This is the same for the doctors if doctors have little experience in operation theatre patient could die.
Secondly, the experience is also necessary for the business market because the share market is always ups and down. If the candidate has no experience in this sector the company could have been financially damaged. Moreover, in business world communication is important. If the candidate does not have enough experience he will not able to deal with other company. Thus the candidate cannot gain knowledge with a piece paper but get practical knowledge by using experience.
However, some people do not agree with this claim because they think that if fresher’s has not got chance for the job how they will gain experience. I suggest that there is a huge training centre to prepare for yourself. Candidate can easily get trained and can achieve knowledge which field they want to.
To conclude, qualification is important to develop our knowledge and it is the basis but without practical experience, anyone cannot apply their knowledge. So, the experience is significant for developing our knowledge.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...he share market is always ups and down. If the candidate has no experience in this...
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Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...iness world communication is important. If the candidate does not have enough expe...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
...ll not able to deal with other company. Thus the candidate cannot gain knowledge wit...
^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, thus, for example

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 19.5258426966 87% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 12.4196629213 97% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 14.8657303371 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 11.3162921348 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 33.0505617978 57% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 58.6224719101 58% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 21.0 12.9106741573 163% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1698.0 2235.4752809 76% => OK
No of words: 323.0 442.535393258 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25696594427 5.05705443957 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23936324884 4.55969084622 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96073017773 2.79657885939 106% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 215.323595506 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.479876160991 0.4932671777 97% => OK
syllable_count: 534.6 704.065955056 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.2370786517 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 23.0359550562 82% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 45.5544087027 60.3974514979 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.8823529412 118.986275619 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 23.4991977007 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.23529411765 5.21951772744 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.1795339054 0.243740707755 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0629098125708 0.0831039109588 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0652894158609 0.0758088955206 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110723007867 0.150359130593 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0551426760961 0.0667264976115 83% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 14.1392134831 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 48.8420337079 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 12.1743820225 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 12.1639044944 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.51 8.38706741573 90% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 100.480337079 60% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.8971910112 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.2143820225 86% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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