If two applicants for a job are otherwise equally qualified, the job should go to the applicant with more
experience.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and
explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should
consider the specific circumstances in which adopting the position would or would not be advantageous
and explain how these examples shape your position.
“Experience” this word nowadays had created quite a stir. Every industry, trade, institutions and even non-commercial units have created demands for experienced personnels in different fields of work. So the nation’s developmental structure wants experienced working population repudiating the inexperienced young lads. Is it really feasible to directly fetch for experienced middle aged professionals if we hinder the progress of innocuous pupils who strives hard to get into the professional ladders?
Even though experience helps to create base for perception on ambiguities faced in due course of work, but the enthusiasm inbuild in the tyros are needed for the upliftment of every industry or job and also for the development of entire economy as a whole.
Experience encompasses time which means that a course of work done for a prolonged period thus enabling a person to gain acute knowledge in that specific field but then what about the students who toil day and night for a better result and a better job?
Don’t they deserve a prospective job with such immense knowledge gained? Is all their knowledge and insight in vain just due to lack of experience? The young generations are becoming quite portent to contribute to the field of development and if they meet the knowledge requirement then should they not be laid back only due to lack of experience. The new ideas, patterns and creations which they can bring with them should always be counted for an industry to develop. To be more specific, the tech industries like the FAANG (as we say informally for Facebook, Apple, Amazon, Netflix and Google) have developed a wide diversity by engaging all kinds of new graduates, interns and even experienced professionals for their working population. The fresh graduates imbibe their energy and new skills into work and the experienced professionals lands in only when some precedented situations requires their attractions.
Even the health industries amidst the pandemic Covid 19 prevailing all over, many new scientists and medical practitioners have contributed to the affected patients and to deliver the vaccines within such short time. There was no distinction made when such sort of emergency cropped up to hire the novice.
It is an indisputable fact that experience always helps to deliver optimum result in any specific work but this experience find its base when the novice are given chance to gain that insight by pragmatically engaging in the specific field of their choice.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 248, Rule ID: NEEDS_FIXED[1]
Message: "wants experienced" is only accepted in certain dialects. For something more widely acceptable, try 'experiencing' or 'to be experienced'.
Suggestion: experiencing; to be experienced
... nation’s developmental structure wants experienced working population repudiating the inex...
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Line 9, column 257, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... in the specific field of their choice.
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, really, so, then, thus, sort of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 19.5258426966 51% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 12.4196629213 24% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 14.8657303371 114% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.3162921348 97% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 33.0505617978 64% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 58.6224719101 80% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 12.9106741573 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2115.0 2235.4752809 95% => OK
No of words: 401.0 442.535393258 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.27431421446 5.05705443957 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.47492842339 4.55969084622 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99496367285 2.79657885939 107% => OK
Unique words: 231.0 215.323595506 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.576059850374 0.4932671777 117% => OK
syllable_count: 651.6 704.065955056 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 6.24550561798 16% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.2370786517 74% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 23.0359550562 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 71.5745454443 60.3974514979 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 141.0 118.986275619 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.7333333333 23.4991977007 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.06666666667 5.21951772744 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.149817693932 0.243740707755 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0509622702726 0.0831039109588 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0519157657797 0.0758088955206 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0771353471975 0.150359130593 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0540676494168 0.0667264976115 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.8 14.1392134831 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 48.8420337079 92% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 12.1743820225 110% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 12.1639044944 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.3 8.38706741573 111% => OK
difficult_words: 111.0 100.480337079 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 11.8971910112 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 11.2143820225 111% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 83.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 6
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