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Imagination is a more valuable asset than experience

Imagination is one’s ability to think beyond boundaries and of course out of the box. The famous quote, “Imagination is the creator of all” explicitly explains the extent to which a single imagination can do. On the other hand, experience is the overall asset of human life. What we experience becomes the foundation of what we think, how we think and what we offer. Therefore, the claim thus made by the prompt cannot be stated as it is. There are several reasons for which experience surpasses imagination for being the most valuable assets in life.
First of all, imagination is beginning of experience only if that is put into action. For example, the theory of relativity and existence of black hole was a mere imagination of the greatest scientist of all, Albert Einstein. Following his path, Sir, Stephan Hawkings too put forth his theories regarding the presence of several black holes in the universe. Until proven, this was just an imagination of two greatest minds because science is based on facts, experiments and data. Only in 2018, Dr. Katie Bowhman, an computer engineer scientist was able to decode the program to give the world the first image of black hole which was regarded as one of the greatest accomplishment of twenty first century. If imagination was confined within the brain and not acted upon it just a thought which passed by the mind; which created an idea to initiate something, however, it’s the numerous effort and hundreds of failed attempts which brought imagination to reality.
Secondly, the greatest leader of American history, Martin Luther King Jr. with his famous speech ‘I have a dream’ gave the world the extent of his imagination; a society, a nation where everyone is equal, where differences has no place to survive and where only compassion and support exist. If this imagination was not given a voice by thousands of supporters to remove racism, to remove inequality and to bring establish justice for all, Mr. King’s imagination would have died with him. Protests, awareness and realization of equality which was done through experience made it possible to reach where we are. Imagination should be worked with, without which it is just a vague thought having no meaning and significance.
Lastly, experience is what shapes a person vision and his thought. A man cannot be greatest with an imagination but with his experience. However, imagination pulls off the cords of limits and boundaries, experience shows the limit and confinement and feasibility of the work. For example, a person can imagine of creating dinosaurs back but does this imagination hold water until proven, until experienced about actually bringing them back? The answer is no. Such a ubiquitous task limits within imagination until proven through experience.
To sum up, imagination is precursor of invention but it is not the only assets which can supersede experience. Experience gives results while imagination gives us theory whilst both are necessary a straight claim of one being superior to the other cannot be ascertained.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, first, however, if, lastly, regarding, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, while, for example, of course, first of all, to sum up, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 29.0 19.5258426966 149% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 12.4196629213 64% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 14.8657303371 121% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.3162921348 124% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 33.0505617978 76% => OK
Preposition: 68.0 58.6224719101 116% => OK
Nominalization: 39.0 12.9106741573 302% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2571.0 2235.4752809 115% => OK
No of words: 502.0 442.535393258 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.12151394422 5.05705443957 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.7334296765 4.55969084622 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80999167921 2.79657885939 100% => OK
Unique words: 263.0 215.323595506 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.52390438247 0.4932671777 106% => OK
syllable_count: 810.0 704.065955056 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 6.24550561798 32% => OK
Article: 10.0 4.99550561798 200% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.38483146067 160% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.2370786517 119% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 23.0359550562 87% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.4701236585 60.3974514979 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.125 118.986275619 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9166666667 23.4991977007 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.91666666667 5.21951772744 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 7.80617977528 77% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 5.13820224719 136% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.83258426966 145% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.250287932931 0.243740707755 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0815345203723 0.0831039109588 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0650890268946 0.0758088955206 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153044553201 0.150359130593 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0576076110389 0.0667264976115 86% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 14.1392134831 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 48.8420337079 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 12.1743820225 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.1639044944 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.43 8.38706741573 101% => OK
difficult_words: 121.0 100.480337079 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.8971910112 59% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 10.0 11.2143820225 89% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 83.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 6
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