Imagination is a more valuable asset than experience.
Imagination is a tool that every human being posses giving him or her the ability to change the world. Imagination helps a person to explore the world beyond his or her limit and provides him or her with the ultimate power and motivation to conquer it. For an imaginative person sky is the limit where he can dream with creativity and utmost satisfaction without having the thinking or fearing about the boundaries and rules that the world has. Though experience is something that is most valuable in every field and one cannnot acheive anything if he or she hasn't have experience how to achieve it, I belive that imagination is more valuable.
All the people whom we could think of today like World's most successful entrepeneur Steve Jobs, great scientist and physicst Albert Einstein all had uniquely imaginative minds which against all odds made things possible which could only be thought of that time. Experimenting and developing new things and technologies don't require any experience because they haven't been made before it is the power of imagination that helps to transform thoughts into reality. Steve Jobs revolutionized the technological industry with his phenomenal inventions and innovations that he introduced in our daily usage devices like phones, laptops which made our work even more easier and comfortable, he may not had that kind of experience in that age nor anyone to guide him with it. It was his imagination and determination that helped him transform his thoughts into reality.
Another very beautiful example of imagination are artists or poets who with the help of there imagination's creativity paint such beautiful thoughts on canvas and in the form of words which nobody can imagine to have to. Artisits like Leonardo Da Vinci, Rabindranath Tagore saw the world in truly a different form because they had the creativity to do so, every line a poet writes or every brudh stroke that painter paints has it own uniqueness and creativity which can't be acheived through any experience only a mind filled with abstract imagination and curiosity can do so.
But there are many other fields and real life examples which draw the light on the fact that experience is the only thing that helps to acheive things successfully. For instance in the scientific feild it is the experienced scientist who have undergone years of study and research being able to point out new facts and discoveries and correct the previous ones, and in order to acheive that they have to have a experience of those concepts before or else any newbie can't imagine to acheive those without having that sense of knowledge. If imagination gives a power to dream of ideas and motivation to acheive them it is the experience of a person which gives the determination to turn those thoughts to reality.
A human mind is capable of performing extraordinary activities be it on the basis of experience or imagination both the fuels are required to fuel the car of innovation, invention and discoveries. One has to have a balance of both in order to acheive his or her dreams because as Steve Jobs said "People who are crazy enough to think they can change the world are the ones who do so".
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: easier
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Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'imagine having'.
Suggestion: imagine having
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Message: Did you mean 'owns'?
Suggestion: owns
...brudh stroke that painter paints has it own uniqueness and creativity which cant be...
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Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, so, as to, for instance, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 19.5258426966 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 12.4196629213 56% => OK
Conjunction : 33.0 14.8657303371 222% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 28.0 11.3162921348 247% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 54.0 33.0505617978 163% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 69.0 58.6224719101 118% => OK
Nominalization: 27.0 12.9106741573 209% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2667.0 2235.4752809 119% => OK
No of words: 540.0 442.535393258 122% => OK
Chars per words: 4.93888888889 5.05705443957 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.82057051367 4.55969084622 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77882140889 2.79657885939 99% => OK
Unique words: 261.0 215.323595506 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.483333333333 0.4932671777 98% => OK
syllable_count: 861.3 704.065955056 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.38483146067 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.2370786517 74% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 36.0 23.0359550562 156% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 77.9742407608 60.3974514979 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 177.8 118.986275619 149% => OK
Words per sentence: 36.0 23.4991977007 153% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.06666666667 5.21951772744 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 7.80617977528 128% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 10.2758426966 136% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.13820224719 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.207470420804 0.243740707755 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0826475562406 0.0831039109588 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0618267805804 0.0758088955206 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120265004074 0.150359130593 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0434943421187 0.0667264976115 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.8 14.1392134831 140% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.94 48.8420337079 72% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.3 12.1743820225 142% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.96 12.1639044944 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.29 8.38706741573 99% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 100.480337079 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.8971910112 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.4 11.2143820225 146% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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