The increasingly rapid pace of life today causes more problems than it solves.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
My Response: With the advancement of civilization and economic growth, the lives of people have become more dynamic and rapid than ever before. Everyone is running to achieve their own goal in this modern world. It cannot be denied that there are numerous advantages and good aspects of this rapid style of life but at the same time, it creates a lot of problems. Here, the statement is saying that the increasingly rapid pace of life today causes more problems than it solves. I mostly agree with the statement. I will illustrate my position with the example of transportation, communication, and dieting.
First, with the advent of private cars, people are being able to go from one place to another place within a very short time. It is more comfortable than public transport as well. But, nowadays, the number of private cars is increasing in an uncontrolled way. As a result, car accidents are increasing. Moreover, more cars in the city streets mean more traffic jam in the streets. Let's take the example of a small country named Bangladesh. In Dhaka which is the capital city of Bangladesh, the increasing number of cars has created a huge problem for the people of the city. Traffic jam in Dahaka has become a very concerning issue for the city dwellers. Very often, it takes almost 2-3 hours to drive 5 kilometers from one place to another place. Moreover, people are not using bi-cycles nowadays to adopt the new rapid style of life. So, they are not doing enough physical work and consequently, they are suffering from various type of problems like obesity, high blood pressure etc.
Second, with the advancement of technology, the communication system has gone through a revolutionary change in the last two decades. Nowadays, people are able to communicate with their near and dear ones within a second. Various social sites like facebook, WhatsApp, Google+ etc have facilitated to communicate with the people living in the other portion of the world. People are using e-mail instead of FAX nowadays for various official and unofficial purposes. But, all these things have brought a lot of problems too. A lot of People around the world are being a victim of online bullying and assault. Moreover, security is a big issue in the case of social sites and e-mail. One can lose a huge quantity of important data within a millisecond. A few months ago, Bangladesh Bank has lost a huge amount of money
due to the lack of security in the software of the bank.
Finally, Fast food is another consequence of the rapid pace of life of people. In this modern world, everyone remains busy most of the time. People don't get enough time to cook foods on their own at home. So, various type of fast foods is replacing the homemade foods which people used to eat earlier. As a result, as fast foods are full of calories, people are facing a lot of health problems like obesity, diabetic, high blood pressure, heart attack etc. Moreover, in this rapid and dynamic world, people are so busy that they don't have enough time to spend with friends and family. They don't have time to have dinner together as they did earlier. Even the working women are seeking the help of childcare for their babies. Consequently, people who don't get enough attention from their friends and family, feel lonely and as a result, suffer from various psychological issues.
To conclude, it cannot be denied that the rapid pace of life is providing us with ample opportunities to grow our career and also making our lives comfortable, but the above-mentioned examples prove that at the same time it creates a lot of problems in our life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, finally, first, if, moreover, second, so, well, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 26.0 19.5258426966 133% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 12.4196629213 32% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 14.8657303371 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.3162921348 71% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 35.0 33.0505617978 106% => OK
Preposition: 95.0 58.6224719101 162% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 12.9106741573 85% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3002.0 2235.4752809 134% => OK
No of words: 624.0 442.535393258 141% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.8108974359 5.05705443957 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.99799879888 4.55969084622 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61758132672 2.79657885939 94% => OK
Unique words: 294.0 215.323595506 137% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.471153846154 0.4932671777 96% => OK
syllable_count: 957.6 704.065955056 136% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 6.24550561798 176% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.99550561798 140% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 36.0 20.2370786517 178% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 23.0359550562 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.8252967566 60.3974514979 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.3888888889 118.986275619 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3333333333 23.4991977007 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.33333333333 5.21951772744 45% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 7.80617977528 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 10.2758426966 136% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 5.13820224719 175% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 13.0 4.83258426966 269% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.161438425591 0.243740707755 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.043390785027 0.0831039109588 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0631112470371 0.0758088955206 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0854736147775 0.150359130593 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0740103397417 0.0667264976115 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 14.1392134831 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 48.8420337079 128% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 12.1743820225 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.32 12.1639044944 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.77 8.38706741573 93% => OK
difficult_words: 130.0 100.480337079 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.8971910112 71% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 11.2143820225 78% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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